请问这个文章翻译的对么?如果有语法错误请纠正.谢谢了~~~本人急需~~Foreign media have to Tianjin listed as "the world livable cities " list, as students in Tianjin, I think the first should be a livable city for social harmony

请问这个文章翻译的对么?如果有语法错误请纠正.谢谢了~~~本人急需~~Foreign media have to Tianjin listed as "the world livable cities " list, as students in Tianjin, I think the first should be a livable city for social harmony
请问这个文章翻译的对么?如果有语法错误请纠正.谢谢了~~~本人急需~~
Foreign media have to Tianjin listed as "the world livable cities " list, as students in Tianjin, I think the first should be a livable city for social harmony and stability, comfort and convenience of city life. Second, culture should be a livable city rich in heavy city, because only the degree of cultural rich city, in order to improve the overall quality of urban residents.
And as a livable city of Tianjin to one, it should be efficient, low consumption, harmony, security. First of all, the city's operation should be efficient. For example: urban traffic smooth, no jams. Second, the city should the low consumption of resources to achieve cost-effective development. Finally, building a harmonious society, effective protection of urban safety.
Therefore, I am in Tianjin as a student, I should be doing my best to make a livable city of Tianjin.
国外媒体曾将天津列进“世界宜居城市”榜单,作为天津的学子,我认为宜居城市首先应该是是社会和谐稳定,生活舒适便捷的城市.其次,宜居城市应该是文化丰富厚重的城市,因为只有具有文化丰厚度的城市,才能提高城市居民的整体素质.
而天津要作为宜居城市之一,应当实现高效,低耗、和谐,安全.首先,城市的运转应是高效率的.例如：城市交通通畅,不拥堵.其次,城市要以资源的低消耗来取得高效益的发展.最后,建设和谐社会,切实保障城市安全.
因此,我作为一名天津学子,我应该尽我所能去使天津成为宜居城市.

请问这个文章翻译的对么?如果有语法错误请纠正.谢谢了~~~本人急需~~Foreign media have to Tianjin listed as "the world livable cities " list, as students in Tianjin, I think the first should be a livable city for social harmony
基本上都不对.浮云浮云
还有你最后一句有点问题,前面说已经是宜居城市了,后面又说让他成为宜居城市,我改了一下,你看看吧
Foreign media once listed the city of Tianjing as one of the most livable cities worldwide. As a student in Tianjing, I am of the opinion that such a city shoud be, first of all, characterized by social harmony and stability,combined with comfort and convenience in life. Culture comes second. A most livable city can only expect to improve the overall quality of its residents through an age-old culture.
Tianjing, among all other most livable cities, should strive towards high efficiency, low energy comsuption, harmony and safety. In the first place, the workings of a city should be highly efficient. Transportation, for instance, should be in good condition to avoid traffic jams. Second, the city should seek its rapid development through a low-consumption way. Last but not the least, a harmonious society can contribute to safeguarding the city.
I, therefore, as a student in Tianjing, would like to do my best to make Tianjing a better living-friendly city.