一封英文信帮我改改对方加拿大人Hello I'm XXX I'm come from china,I'm very happy to go to your country.Your name is XXX?My English name is David,you like play games right?I also like it,it can make me be happy,and my favourite music is E
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一封英文信帮我改改对方加拿大人Hello I'm XXX I'm come from china,I'm very happy to go to your country.Your name is XXX?My English name is David,you like play games right?I also like it,it can make me be happy,and my favourite music is E
一封英文信帮我改改对方加拿大人
Hello I'm XXX I'm come from china,I'm very happy to go to your country.
Your name is XXX?My English name is David,you like play games right?I also like it,it can make me be happy,and my favourite music is English music,Like 《It's my life》bon jovi 《When you're gone》Avril Ramona Lavigne Whibley.I really love her and his songs.In sep'25th I will go there,and i really want to be your friend,your chinese friend,I hope you be luckly
your friend
David
一封英文信帮我改改对方加拿大人Hello I'm XXX I'm come from china,I'm very happy to go to your country.Your name is XXX?My English name is David,you like play games right?I also like it,it can make me be happy,and my favourite music is E
Hello I'm XXX I'm came from china,I'm very happy to go to your country in just a few more days.
Your name is XXX right?My English name is David,i heard that you like playing games right?I like to play games too,the games can make me feel happy,i like english music alot,Like 《It's my life》from bon jovi 《When you're gone》from Avril Ramona Lavigne Whibley.I really love there songs.In sep'25th I will go there,and i really want to be your friend,your new chinese friend.
Best regard David
这样就可以了,没问题我是美国的
and my favourite music is English music 这一句 改为 i like listening the english songs a lot ,how about you ?再说你爱听的歌名 ,说不定还会引起共鸣呢 (我个人是超级Avril迷、超级JB迷)
Avril Ramona Lavigne Whibley(这个 。。你还是分开写吧 ,...
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and my favourite music is English music 这一句 改为 i like listening the english songs a lot ,how about you ?再说你爱听的歌名 ,说不定还会引起共鸣呢 (我个人是超级Avril迷、超级JB迷)
Avril Ramona Lavigne Whibley(这个 。。你还是分开写吧 ,人名都写乱了。。)
and i really want to be your friend这个。。改成 and i really want to make feiends with you.
your chinese friend,这句删了把
I hope you be luckly 改为 good luck!
我是一个地道的老外通嘿。。。。我觉得和老外打交道啊,还是口语化点哈。。其实写信也一样,不用太紧张的嘞。。嘿嘿
仅是个人意见哈 ,希望对你有所帮助 记得开心啊
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