求大神给修改两句英语 1 First,you face daily smile,maintain a good mood2 Secondly,we must pay attention to their diet,not to drink too much wine,water,every day at least eight cups of water; Deliberately not to lose weight,did you have no he

求大神给修改两句英语 1 First,you face daily smile,maintain a good mood2 Secondly,we must pay attention to their diet,not to drink too much wine,water,every day at least eight cups of water; Deliberately not to lose weight,did you have no he
求大神给修改两句英语
1 First,you face daily smile,maintain a good mood
2 Secondly,we must pay attention to their diet,not to drink too much wine,water,every day at least eight cups of water; Deliberately not to lose weight,did you have no health benefits.
3 Personally,I love sports.I enjoy participating in sports.I feel that I not only gain a well-balanced life through sports,but also get more chances to move closer to nature.Sports have really added happiness to my daily life.
4 Become the traditional way of life into a convenient electronic lifestyle.
5 Resulting in a lot of people in life not be able to communicate,fear of intimate communication and physical contact with people.
6 Own thinking is small,more plagiarism.

求大神给修改两句英语 1 First,you face daily smile,maintain a good mood2 Secondly,we must pay attention to their diet,not to drink too much wine,water,every day at least eight cups of water; Deliberately not to lose weight,did you have no he
1.First,you have to wear smile on your face everyday,maintaining a good mood.
2.Secondly,we must pay attention to our diets,not too much mine,but we have to drink at least eight cups of water every day.Losing weight has no benefit to you
3.Personally,I love sports.I feel that I gain not only a well-balanced life,but also more chances of having intimate relationship with nature.Sports really add happiness to my daily life
4.Convenient electronic lifestlye has become a traditional way of life
5.Fear of intimate communication and physical contact with people has results that a lot of people are not able to communicate
6.Plagiarism is the represent of having no personal thinking,which is ungraceful.
你的这个完全是拿翻译器翻得 语法不通

写得你妹的这是啥啊？一团那啥啊，卧槽，看了两句实在看不下去了。你这是作业么？要不你把中文发上来让人重新写得了。。