谢谢你帮我写的那篇作文,只是觉得前面的句子的好长,读起来也不太顺.可不可以再改改!

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谢谢你帮我写的那篇作文,只是觉得前面的句子的好长,读起来也不太顺.可不可以再改改!谢谢你帮我写的那篇作文,只是觉得前面的句子的好长,读起来也不太顺.可不可以再改改!谢谢你帮我写的那篇作文,只是觉得前面

谢谢你帮我写的那篇作文,只是觉得前面的句子的好长,读起来也不太顺.可不可以再改改!
谢谢你帮我写的那篇作文,只是觉得前面的句子的好长,读起来也不太顺.可不可以再改改!

谢谢你帮我写的那篇作文,只是觉得前面的句子的好长,读起来也不太顺.可不可以再改改!
I have a little but very happy family.My husband loves me very much,and we have a cute daughter.We love our daughter very much.I am an accountant of a factory.And I also teach myself some college lessons in my spare time.My husband is a purchaser of a factory.And our daughter is now studying in a kindergarten.Although we are not very rich,we still enjoy this ordinary happy life.I cherish this warm family and my dear husband and daughter very much!
记得你好像说要高二水平的,所以用了一些比较复杂的句式,现在稍微做了一下改动,

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