谁能帮忙找错.英文的The spring is very warm.The frog slept during the winter.She was very hungry so.She wanted to find some food.in the spring.The water is very warm.the trees was going to be green.Some tadpole saw a duck play with his mother

谁能帮忙找错.英文的The spring is very warm.The frog slept during the winter.She was very hungry so.She wanted to find some food.in the spring.The water is very warm.the trees was going to be green.Some tadpole saw a duck play with his mother
谁能帮忙找错.英文的
The spring is very warm.The frog slept during the winter.She was very hungry so.She wanted to find some food.
in the spring.The water is very warm.the trees was going to be green.Some tadpole saw a duck play with his mother.So .he asked the little duck.:” did you see my mother?What did she look like?The duck said:” well,your mother had two big eyes and a big mouth.“thanks,the tadpole said.After some time.He found a fish.So he ask the fish.” are you my mother?” “No,I am not your mother.because your mother has four legs.” “thank you!” the tadpole said.They went straight the water.And saw a frog.he said :” are you my mother?” the frog said “yes.baby.I am your mother.In the future ,when you grow up.You will be able to look like me .”
“Yeah .”the tadpole said.He was very happy.

谁能帮忙找错.英文的The spring is very warm.The frog slept during the winter.She was very hungry so.She wanted to find some food.in the spring.The water is very warm.the trees was going to be green.Some tadpole saw a duck play with his mother
Spring was warm.A frog woke up,She was so hungry that she wanted to find something to eat.
Water was very warm in Spring.Trees are getting green.Some tadpole saw a little ducky was playing with his mother.They asked the little ducky:"Did you see our mother?What does she look like?" The little ducky said:"Well,your mother has two big eyes and a big mouth."
"Thanks ."said the tadpole.Later,they saw a fish,so they asked the fish:" Are you our mother?" The fish said:"No,I am not your mother,your mother has four legs."
“Thank you!” said the tadpole.They kept on going.Then they saw a frog.They asked:” Are you our mother?” The frog said “Yes,baby.!I am your mother.You will just look like me when you've grown up.”
“Yeah .”said the tadpole.They were so happy that they finally found their mother .
整篇文章的中文痕迹很浓.我只是改了一些明显的语法错误和明显不对的语顺.不知你意在何处?如果只是改错,还可以说得过去；如果是想写一篇英语的童话故事,则还不够好,不够地道.若是后者,我还可以帮你.

1.整个文章的每段开头部分的时态有点不一致哦.“is very warm”，“slept”，“She was ……”
2.“She was very hungry so”这个表达方法不太好，拟改为：“She was so hungry ”or“She was hungry very/so much”
3.“a duck play with his mother”中的play改为pl...

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1.整个文章的每段开头部分的时态有点不一致哦.“is very warm”，“slept”，“She was ……”
2.“She was very hungry so”这个表达方法不太好，拟改为：“She was so hungry ”or“She was hungry very/so much”
3.“a duck play with his mother”中的play改为playing效果好些。
4.“because your mother has four legs”中去掉because 更简练。
5.“You will be able to look like me ”这个表达不够地道。
6.文中有些人称代词指代也不够明确。

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