请高手帮我看看下面一小段英语有没有语法错误啊.If I choose,I would like to choose the friends different from my character may be more interesting.First,the people who have different view with me could bring fresh world that I've n

请高手帮我看看下面一小段英语有没有语法错误啊.If I choose,I would like to choose the friends different from my character may be more interesting.First,the people who have different view with me could bring fresh world that I've n
请高手帮我看看下面一小段英语有没有语法错误啊.
If I choose,I would like to choose the friends different from my character may be more interesting.First,the people who have different view with me could bring fresh world that I've never seen.we could see each other more clearly and objectively.second,beacuse we hold different opinions about life that can unleash great potential perhaps.use different way of thinking and consider more comprehensive about the circumstance for instance.last,flavor taste.suppose I really like classical music and don't care about others kind of musics.But he or she is a pop music fan.That means I have chance to know about pop music probably is not too bad.

请高手帮我看看下面一小段英语有没有语法错误啊.If I choose,I would like to choose the friends different from my character may be more interesting.First,the people who have different view with me could bring fresh world that I've n
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If I choose,I would like to choose the friends different from my character,(which) may be more interesting.First,the people who have different view (from mine) could bring fresh world that I've never seen.we could (understand) each other more clearly and objectively.(Secondly),we hold different opinions (of) life that can (release) great potential perhaps (when we communicate each other).Using different way of thinking and considering more comprehensive things about the circumstance (would gain us a lot).Lastly,flavor taste.Suppose I really like classical music and don't care about (whatever kind of musics he or she loves).That means I have chance to know about pop music,which probably is not too bad.