一百分献上,帮我看看这篇英语演讲稿有没有什么语法或者逻辑毛病.帮我改改漫长的暑假已经过去,我们步入了高中的校门.The summer vacation is* over.we are going to be high school students.过去的三年,我

一百分献上,帮我看看这篇英语演讲稿有没有什么语法或者逻辑毛病.帮我改改漫长的暑假已经过去,我们步入了高中的校门.The summer vacation is* over.we are going to be high school students.过去的三年,我
一百分献上,帮我看看这篇英语演讲稿有没有什么语法或者逻辑毛病.
帮我改改
漫长的暑假已经过去,我们步入了高中的校门.
The summer vacation is* over.we are going to be high school students.
过去的三年,我们在欢笑与泪水中体会了成长,学会了奋斗,懂得了坚强.
In the last 3 years,we grew up with bitterness and laughters,learning how to sweat and what is endurance.
将来的三年,我们面对的是全新的未来.
In the following 3 years,we are welcomed by a brand new future.
高中是人生中非常重要的阶段,规划好高中学习对一生都有重要的影响.
High school is important in our life,so make a good plan to study better is also important.
和初中相比,高中将面临更多的挑战,不仅仅是学习,更多的是在学习知识的过程中学到的更多更有用的东西.
Compared with junior high,senior high has more challenges for us to face.Not only the study that matters but other useful things in this process.
上课注意听讲,我们明白了什么时候该做什么.
Listen carefully in class can make us know what should we do in a correct time.
下课后记得做功课,我们懂得了我们还有一份责任.
After class we should finish the homework which is the most important duty of students
当遇到难题的时候,我们学会了如何克服困难.
When we meet problem,we should learn how to get over it.
在孤军奋战无果时得到了同学的帮助,我们知道了团结的重要性.
When others give their hands to us when we are alone,we come to realize that the unification is the power.
考试成绩出来后,我们知道了有付出就有收获.
When the exam results come out,we know there are paid.
其实这些是显而易见的,但是我们往往会忘记.有的人学习可能只是为了成绩,但是往往收获最多的是过程.
In fact,these are obviously,but we always forget to.Some people learn may only to score,but often is the largest harvest process.
我相信,三年后,我们能为我们的高中生活画上一个完美的句号.
I believe that our high school three years later we can life picture perfect end.

一百分献上,帮我看看这篇英语演讲稿有没有什么语法或者逻辑毛病.帮我改改漫长的暑假已经过去,我们步入了高中的校门.The summer vacation is* over.we are going to be high school students.过去的三年,我
过去的三年,我们在欢笑与泪水中体会了成长,学会了奋斗,懂得了坚强.
In the past 3 years, we grew up with bitterness and laughters, learned how to fight for what we believe in and what is endurance.
将来的三年,我们面对的是全新的未来.
In the next 3 years,we are facing a brand new future.
和初中相比,高中将面临更多的挑战,不仅仅是学习,更多的是在学习知识的过程中学到的更多更有用的东西.
Compared with middle school, high school is more challenging for us Not only that study matters but other learning new things is important.
课注意听讲,我们明白了什么时候该做什么.
Listen carefully in class can help us know what should we do later on.
当遇到难题的时候,我们学会了如何克服困难.
When we face a problem,we should learn how solve it.
考试成绩出来后,我们知道了有付出就有收获.
When the exam results come out, we know that our hard work has been paid off.
其实这些是显而易见的,但是我们往往会忘记.有的人学习可能只是为了成绩,但是往往收获最多的是过程.
In fact, these are obvious, but we always forget about it. Some people may study only for the score, but often is the process is mor impotrant.
我相信,三年后,我们能为我们的高中生活画上一个完美的句号.
I believe that after our three years of high school ,we all will go so far in our life.

楼主有一些语法有问题,不过总体是很不错的,继续加油.以上为美式英语
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