雅思小作文,请帮忙修改This line chartshows the information about international tourist arrivals in five countriesfrom 1995 to 2010. In 1995, thefigures of Brazil and Egypt both are theleast (less than 10 million tourists). At that time, the

雅思小作文,请帮忙修改This line chartshows the information about international tourist arrivals in five countriesfrom 1995 to 2010. In 1995, thefigures of Brazil and Egypt both are theleast (less than 10 million tourists). At that time, the
雅思小作文,请帮忙修改
This line chartshows the information about international tourist arrivals in five countriesfrom 1995 to 2010.

In 1995, thefigures of Brazil and Egypt both are theleast (less than 10 million tourists). At that time, the number ofinternational tourists in Malaysiais more than 20 million. And the figure of France is over 30 millioninternational tourists. As for USA,there are about 70 million.

The figures of Brazil and Egypt are increased. But they are raisedslowly. And the quantity of tourists in Egypt(20 million) is more than Brazil’s(less than 20 million) in 2010. For Malaysia, the figure risen slowly until2005 (about 35 million tourists). After that, it risen substantially and peakedabout 50 million international tourists. In France, the figure also has been onthe rise. In 2010, it peak a top and was same as the figure of USA.

All in all, all ofthese countries’ international tourists are increasing.
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雅思小作文,请帮忙修改This line chartshows the information about international tourist arrivals in five countriesfrom 1995 to 2010. In 1995, thefigures of Brazil and Egypt both are theleast (less than 10 million tourists). At that time, the
At that time,the number of international tourists in Malaysiais reaches more than 20 million.

The figures of Brazil and Egypt  increase
however, they are rising slowly
For Malaysia,the figure doesn't rise dratamaically until2005 (about 35 million tourists)
After that,it  reaches  its peak at  about 50 million international tourists.
In 2010,it rises to the top with approximately the same number of foreign tourists as the of USA