在线等!真的很急啊!SOSWhat is a good student ? First ,I think a good student must get on well with your classmates ,and you can helpful others, this is important. As a goo

在线等!真的很急啊!SOSWhat is a good student ? First ,I think a good student must get on well with your classmates ,and you can helpful others, this is important. As a goo
在线等!真的很急啊!SOS
What is a good student ? First ,I think a good student must get on well with your classmates ,and you can helpful others, this is important. As a good student, you should like reading book. Because books can help you become smarter.
If you don't have a good mark, It doesn't matter .But you should
hard--working.
If you will something else, it is really good
英语高手,看看这里有语法错误吗?如果有尽管提啊!
还有把正确的句子也写上啊

在线等!真的很急啊!SOSWhat is a good student ? First ,I think a good student must get on well with your classmates ,and you can helpful others, this is important. As a goo
1/意思好像有点不对.第二句的与你的同学相处好,你之前要写一句 If you want to be a good student,you must get on well with your classmates.要不然意思会变成“我认为一个好学生必须和你的同学相处融洽” 2/...you can helpful others."helpful"是形容词,而can后接的是动词改为help 3/还有把this is important改为it's important to,调到 help others 前,把you can 删掉 4/Because books can help you become smarter 在books 前加一个reading（动词作主语,形式为ing形式）,help改为make,后面的become smarter是错误的,你可以写为get more knowledge 整句话为Because reading books can make you get more knowledge.5/这个If you will something else,will后应该有个动词,要不然这句话根本不是一句话了 6/既然你用了first这序数词,后面应该继续用second ,third之类了,才能使文章更有条理性 或是你不用first这种词 我展现一下我的所想,请看改后文章：What is a good student?Do you want to be a good student?If you want to be a good student,you must get on well with your classmates and it's important to help others.As a good student,you should like reading books.Because reading books can make you get more knowledge.If you don't have a good mark,it doesn't matter.But you should work hard.我也快中考了,一起加油吧!