写了一篇英语演讲稿,有很多错误,麻烦修改一下,急用Hello everyone.,I’m glad to stand here,and give you a speech.Wy topic is “Like a child forever”.Whenever someone say:"watching spongebob squarepants!" and his friends often gi

写了一篇英语演讲稿,有很多错误,麻烦修改一下,急用Hello everyone.,I’m glad to stand here,and give you a speech.Wy topic is “Like a child forever”.Whenever someone say:"watching spongebob squarepants!" and his friends often gi
写了一篇英语演讲稿,有很多错误,麻烦修改一下,急用
Hello everyone.,I’m glad to stand here,and give you a speech.Wy topic is “Like a child forever”.Whenever someone say:"watching spongebob squarepants!" and his friends often give him such a look the meaning is too young too naïve .However,not all cartoons are childish synonymous.It has its own unique charm,and that is to keep us innocence.When we were child,we are always full of confidence and courage,for things we wanted will do our best to fight for,when we grew up in the face of the things we like,always feel time not enough,or in difficulties,it doesn't even have the courage to try.When we were a child,we are always very pure,is happy,easy to feel satisfied,grow up,We have a lot but don't feel happy We have changed .This is not a question of age but we do not like a child,as long as we like,we can always be like a child,always passionate,always happy,always keep a smile.even if myself alone can also not afraid If you carry your childhood with you,you never become older.I hope you like a child forever

写了一篇英语演讲稿,有很多错误,麻烦修改一下,急用Hello everyone.,I’m glad to stand here,and give you a speech.Wy topic is “Like a child forever”.Whenever someone say:"watching spongebob squarepants!" and his friends often gi
改的还是比较多 你的有些用法太过直译化 不要靠翻译
Hello everyone.I ‘m glad to stand here and give you a speech.I want to talk about being like a child forever.Whenever someone say:"Lets watch Spongebob Squarepants!" then his friends often give him a uncomfortable look which means you are too puerile(幼稚的) and too naive .However,not all cartoons stand for childish（我觉得这样比较好）.It has its own unique charm,and that is to keep us innocence.When we were child,we were always full of confidence and courage,we always wanted to do our best to get everything attractive.However,when we grew up in the face of the things we like,we always feel time is not enough or do not believe there’s any possibility,we even don’t have the courage to try.When we were a child,we were always very pure,happy,and easy to feel satisfied.Now,we have a lot but don't feel happy anymore,It shows that we’ve changed a lot.This is not a problem of age but a problem of our different attitude ,as long as we want,we can always be like a child,always passionate,always happy,always keep a smile.,even if loneliness cannot make you feel afraid if you carry your childhood with you in your heart,you’ll never become older.I hope you are like a child forever,never give up and never feel sad.
结束语That's all.Thank you for listening.

Hello everyone.，I’m glad to stand here to give you a speech. My topic is “Be a child forever”. When someone says: "watch spongebob squarepants！" and his friends often give him such a look which means ...

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Hello everyone.，I’m glad to stand here to give you a speech. My topic is “Be a child forever”. When someone says: "watch spongebob squarepants！" and his friends often give him such a look which means he is too young too naïve . However, not all cartoons are childish synonymous. It has its own unique charm, and that is to keep us innocence. When we were children, we are always full of confidence and courage, we do our best to fight for what we desire when we grew up ,faced to the things we like, always feel that the time is not enough, or when faced to difficulties, we don’t even have the courage to try. When we were children, we were always very pure, we felt happy, and it’s so easy to feel satisfied.As time passed by we grew up, We got a lot of what we want but we don't feel happy. We changed . It’s not about aging ,it’s ourselves, as long as we like what we want, we can always be like a child, always being passionate, always being happy, and always keep a smile. Don’t be afraid of being adult. If you carry your childhood dream with you, you will never become older. I hope you like a child forever

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Hello everyone, i am glad to be here to give a speech today. My topic is "Be a child forever".Whenever someone says: "watching spongebob squarepants！" and his friends often give him such a look the ...

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Hello everyone, i am glad to be here to give a speech today. My topic is "Be a child forever".Whenever someone says: "watching spongebob squarepants！" and his friends often give him such a look the meaning is too young too naïve.(实在不懂你这句想表达什么,说给我听我再帮你改）As adults, we often consider cartoons are only for children and watching them will not do us any good. However, certain cartoon characters could often imbue children with confidence and courage. As we grow up, things we used to do right away now become hesistant; satisfication used to be so easy to feel now become a luxury. Time goes by and so goes our innocence. Could we ever be happy easily like a child? Could we still be passionate about everything like a child again? Could we lower our guard towards other people and smile to everyone like a child? I wish the little kid who I was will always be there deep down and keep me young forever.

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Hello everyone.，I’m glad to stand here and give you a speech. My topic is “Be like a child forever”. Someone always says: "watch spongebob squarepants！" Then, his friends often give him such...

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Hello everyone.，I’m glad to stand here and give you a speech. My topic is “Be like a child forever”. Someone always says: "watch spongebob squarepants！" Then, his friends often give him such a look that he is too young and naive . However, not all cartoons are childish synonymous. It has its own unique charm which keeps us innocent. When we were child, we are always full of confidence and courage, for things that we wanted we will do our best to fight for them. When we grow up in the face of the things we like, we always feel that time is not enough, or when we are in difficulties, we don't even have courage to try. When we are children, we are always very pure, happy and easy to feel satisfied.After we grow up, we have a lot of things, but we don't feel happy since we have changed . This is not a question of age but we are not like a children. As long as we like, we can always be like a child, always passionate, always happy and always keep a smile. Even if I am alone,I can not also be afraid. If you carry your childhood with you, you never become old. I hope you are like a child forever.

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