翻译有无语法错误,帮我改正下i grow up and finish my study in a beautiful and relatively simple city..during my college years, i study science and economic theory hard,and hope that the living standard will be improved through the advancem
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翻译有无语法错误,帮我改正下i grow up and finish my study in a beautiful and relatively simple city..during my college years, i study science and economic theory hard,and hope that the living standard will be improved through the advancem
翻译有无语法错误,帮我改正下
i grow up and finish my study in a beautiful and relatively simple city..during my college years, i study science and economic theory hard,and hope that the living standard will be improved through the advancement of western science and technology.i am fond of the people in the living environment and traditional culture.moreover,i look forward to the progress which can bring about great changes.i hope i can learn professional knowledge seriously in the international stage and make contribution to the society. What is more,i own strong ability at study and teamwork.not only would i like to communicate with others and contact with different people and different companies,learn advanced ideas and financial knowledge,but also to devote myself to the development of the company and advancement of the society.
翻译有无语法错误,帮我改正下i grow up and finish my study in a beautiful and relatively simple city..during my college years, i study science and economic theory hard,and hope that the living standard will be improved through the advancem
i am fond of the people in the living environment and traditional culture后面的定语不顺,and后加with什么的
make contribution to the society贡献可数,我查了
not only would i like to communicate with others and contact with different people and different companies,learn advanced ideas and financial knowledge,but also to devote myself to the development of the company and advancement of the society.
应该是i would like not only ,.but also什么的反正主语都是i 提前
1，你的时态不对，应用过去式
2，英语表达太过中国化
3，语句读起来不太通顺