这段英语有什么明显的错误吗,哪些语句可以说的更漂亮些呢.xiaozhang,can you do me a favour?our new client From America are going to visit our factory.they all pretty like startbucks' cooffee.and I am busy preparing the document
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这段英语有什么明显的错误吗,哪些语句可以说的更漂亮些呢.xiaozhang,can you do me a favour?our new client From America are going to visit our factory.they all pretty like startbucks' cooffee.and I am busy preparing the document
这段英语有什么明显的错误吗,哪些语句可以说的更漂亮些呢.
xiaozhang,can you do me a favour?our new client From America
are going to visit our factory.they all pretty like startbucks' cooffee.
and I am busy preparing the document so i can not get
away.I know you drink cooffee frequently ,please help me to buy some cups of
coffee from the starbucks ,which is beside the bank of china on the other side
of the street ,if you have any problem ,pls send me text msg ,as i am not
convient to answer your call during the meeting.thanks
这段英语有什么明显的错误吗,哪些语句可以说的更漂亮些呢.xiaozhang,can you do me a favour?our new client From America are going to visit our factory.they all pretty like startbucks' cooffee.and I am busy preparing the document
有 改正如下：
xiaozhang,can you do me a favour?our new clients from America
are going to visit our factory.They all pretty like startbucks' cooffee.
and I am so busy preparing the document that I can not go
away.I know you drink cooffee frequently .Please help me to buy some cups of
coffee of the starbucks ,which is beside the bank of China on the other side
of the street .If you have any problems ,pls send me text msg ,as it's not
convient for me to answer your call during the meeting.thanks!
单词拼写，convenient 不是convient
逗号太多了，断句有问题，其他没什么。如果是个message的话把符号改点就没什么问题了
差不多了，没什么语法错误，口语的东西，不用说怎么漂亮的，能理解就行