his success came from his insistent,he teaches me the success is that insist on the dream.这句话有什么语法错误吗?

his success came from his insistent,he teaches me the success is that insist on the dream.这句话有什么语法错误吗?
his success came from his insistent,he teaches me the success is that insist on the dream.
这句话有什么语法错误吗?

his success came from his insistent,he teaches me the success is that insist on the dream.这句话有什么语法错误吗?
有.
一、insistent是形容词,不能放在物主代词后面；
二、me后面是宾语从句,宾语从句中的success是抽象名词,不要加the；
三、is后面如果用了that,则后面是一个表语从句,但这个表语从句没有主语.
改动法：
一、insistent改为insistence；
二、去掉the；
三、把错误的表语从句改成动词不定式短语.
改动后的句子为：
His success came from his insistence,he teaches me that success is to insist on the dream.