我直接抄自己写的那部分了,求改正：I know you have problems in learning Chinese.But don't worry about it,I can help you.These are some suggestions that may help you.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can imp

我直接抄自己写的那部分了,求改正：I know you have problems in learning Chinese.But don't worry about it,I can help you.These are some suggestions that may help you.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can imp
我直接抄自己写的那部分了,求改正：
I know you have problems in learning Chinese.But don't worry about it,I can help you.These are some suggestions that may help you.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can improve your spoken English.Second,you could also read some Chinese books ang watch Chinese programs.Third,you should buy some grammar books and do much wirting practice to improve your writing skills.
In fact ,it's not difficult to learn Chinese well if you work hard.You should feel good about yourself.And I'll help you whenever you meet problems.

我直接抄自己写的那部分了,求改正：I know you have problems in learning Chinese.But don't worry about it,I can help you.These are some suggestions that may help you.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can imp
I know you have problems in learning Chinese.But don't worry,I can help you.These are some suggestions that may help you.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can improve your spoken English.Second,you could also read some Chinese books ang watch Chinese programs.Third,you should buy some grammar books and do much wirting practice to improve your writing skills.
In fact ,it's not difficult to learn Chinese well if you work hard.You should feel good about yourself.And I'll help you whenever you meet problems.
I know that
about it 去掉
these 改成 there
spoken English 应该是oral Chinese
watch Chinese TV programs
I recommend you the TV play named "Home with Kids"（《家有儿女》）
third 改成 What's more
meet 改成 have
改完是
I know that you have several problems in learning Chinese.But don't worry about it,I can help you.There are some suggestions that may help you.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can improve your oral Chinese.Second,you could also read some Chinese books ang watch Chinese TV programs.I recommend you the TV play named "Home with Kids".What's more,you should buy some grammar books and do much wirting practice to improve your writing skills.
In fact ,it's not difficult to learn Chinese well if you work hard.You should feel good about yourself.And I'll help you whenever you have problems.
祝好!
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我知道你有问题在学习中文。但是别担心,我可以帮助你。这有一些建议能帮助你。首先,你应该试着与他人交谈尽可能多。它可以提高你的英语口语。第二,你也可以看一些中文书和看中国节目。第三,你应该买一些语法书,做得参考了此一时期实践来提高你的写作技巧。事实上,它不是很难学好中文如果你努力工作。你应该对自己感觉良好。。。
亲，先看清题目...

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我知道你有问题在学习中文。但是别担心,我可以帮助你。这有一些建议能帮助你。首先,你应该试着与他人交谈尽可能多。它可以提高你的英语口语。第二,你也可以看一些中文书和看中国节目。第三,你应该买一些语法书,做得参考了此一时期实践来提高你的写作技巧。事实上,它不是很难学好中文如果你努力工作。你应该对自己感觉良好

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.First，Second，Third
改为firstly,secondly,thirdly可这是对的呀，再看看吧大神！These are改为there are。。。
这也没什么错怎么可能这里可以用these表达这些，不是there be的用法！（(⊙o⊙)…，好像变成了我在回答）
不过最好用there be是没错，可我的也对...

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.First，Second，Third
改为firstly,secondly,thirdly

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没什么问题，不错可我扣了一分，老师让我们订正，你确定没错么，再看看吧亲，学霸拜托了I know you have problems in learning Chinese. I can help you.These are some suggestions that may help you.First,you should try to talk with others as much as p...

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没什么问题，不错

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I know that you have some problems in learning Chinese. But please don't worry about it, I can help you. These are some suggestions that will help you. First, you should try to talk to others as much ...

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I know that you have some problems in learning Chinese. But please don't worry about it, I can help you. These are some suggestions that will help you. First, you should try to talk to others as much as possible. It will improve your spoken English. Second, you should read some Chinese books and watch Chinese programs. Finally, you should learn from grammar books and do some writing practices to improve your writing skills.
In fact, it's easy to learn Chinese well if you study hard. You may feel better about yourself. And I'll help you whenever you have problems.

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I know you have diffculties in learning Chinese. But don't worry about that,I would help you.These are some suggestions that may help you.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.I...

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I know you have diffculties in learning Chinese. But don't worry about that,I would help you.These are some suggestions that may help you.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can improve your oral English.Second,you could also read some Chinese books ang watch Chinese programs.Third,you should buy some grammar books and do some wirting practice to improve your writing skills.
In fact ,it's not difficult to learn Chinese well if you work hard. You shouldn't be diffdent about yourself.And I'll help you whenever you meet problems.

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I know you have some difficulties in learning Chinese. But don't worry,I can help you. Here are some suggestions.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can improve your oral C...

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I know you have some difficulties in learning Chinese. But don't worry,I can help you. Here are some suggestions.First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can improve your oral Chinese.Second,you might as well read some Chinese books and watch some programs in Chinese.Third,you can buy some books about grammar and practice your writing skills.
In fact ,it's not too difficult to learn Chinese well if you work hard. You should be confident.And I'll help you whenever you need.

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These are some suggestions that may help you.这里的These改成there会更好一些。
you could also read some Chinese books ang watch Chinese programs这一句里是and估计LZ手误打错了。
写这种文章的结构最好别用third，fourth之类的。可以用的词有 first...

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These are some suggestions that may help you.这里的These改成there会更好一些。
you could also read some Chinese books ang watch Chinese programs这一句里是and估计LZ手误打错了。
写这种文章的结构最好别用third，fourth之类的。可以用的词有 first,second，the next，then，finally等等。

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既然是找语法错误，那像 spoken English 这种笔误就不提了。文章里最明显的错误就是：
Second,you 【could】 also read some Chinese books ang watch Chinese programs.
应该用 can !! 你这是正在提供建议，不需要用过去式。。。。
could是指一种婉转的语气用法，不是过去式
不过前...

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既然是找语法错误，那像 spoken English 这种笔误就不提了。文章里最明显的错误就是：
Second,you 【could】 also read some Chinese books ang watch Chinese programs.
应该用 can !! 你这是正在提供建议，不需要用过去式。

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 I know you have problems in learning Chinese. But don't worry about it,I can help you.These are some suggestions that may help you(These are some helpful suggestions for you).First,you should try to talk with others as much as possible.It can improve your spoken English.(It can improve your oral Chinese)Second,you could also read some Chinese books ang watch Chinese programs.(Second,you could also read some Chinese books and watch Chinese TV programs.)Third,you should buy some grammar books and do much wirting practice to improve your writing skills. (Third,you should buy some grammar books and practice the art of writing frequently to improve your skills.)  In fact ,it's not difficult to learn Chinese well if you work hard. You should feel good about yourself.And I'll help you whenever you meet problems.(And I'll help you whenever you face any problem.)

1. "may help you" means 可能,没有把握
   

2. Oral Chinese is better

3. Be specific. Chinese TV programs.

4. writing means hand writing or just writing something down.  "The art of writing" is more specified. Don't need to mention writing twice in one sentence.
   

5. Should be singular, "problem", not "problems". Will you help if I meet a problem and not problems?