帮我一句话谢谢,亲爱的朋友：货物已经发送,我得知你从别的卖家购买许多货物,他们有的货物我全部有库存.我希望你能从我这里购买.当然,价格方面我会比他们优惠.而且赠品也会比他们丰厚

帮我一句话谢谢,亲爱的朋友：货物已经发送,我得知你从别的卖家购买许多货物,他们有的货物我全部有库存.我希望你能从我这里购买.当然,价格方面我会比他们优惠.而且赠品也会比他们丰厚
帮我一句话谢谢,
亲爱的朋友：货物已经发送,我得知你从别的卖家购买许多货物,他们有的货物我全部有库存.我希望你能从我这里购买.当然,价格方面我会比他们优惠.而且赠品也会比他们丰厚.

帮我一句话谢谢,亲爱的朋友：货物已经发送,我得知你从别的卖家购买许多货物,他们有的货物我全部有库存.我希望你能从我这里购买.当然,价格方面我会比他们优惠.而且赠品也会比他们丰厚
楼上的,商务英语不能这么写啊
Dear friend,
The goods you ordered have been delivered.As I know,you have purchased many products from other retailers.All the products you need are in stock.I hope to recieve your further orders.Our prices are very competitive.And the presents enclosed what you buy are rich.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
yours,
your name

Dear friend,
The goods have already been sent. I got to know that you need to buy many goods from other sellers and I have all the stuff they have. So I hope you can purchase from me. Because I will offer you more prefertial price and I will also give you more presents. Thank you.

TO楼上： “I got to know that you need to buy many goods from other sellers”的意思是“我知道你需要从别人那里买许多货物”，不翻可以，但是不要误导啊。
Dear xxx,
Goods have been delivered.I know you purchased a lot from other vendors.A...

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TO楼上： “I got to know that you need to buy many goods from other sellers”的意思是“我知道你需要从别人那里买许多货物”，不翻可以，但是不要误导啊。
Dear xxx,
Goods have been delivered.I know you purchased a lot from other vendors.Actually I have stock of what they have in hand. Hope you can buy it from me. Of cause,the price I can offer will be more competative and gifts will be more.Thank you
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Dear friend,
The goods have been sent. I have come to the knowledge that you intend to purchase goods on a mass scale from other retailers, yet i have everything you require. I will offer you a better price as well as bonuses. Please accept my offer instead.
Thank You

Dear friends: cargo has been sent, I know you from the seller to buy many other goods, some of them have all my goods inventory. I hope you can I buy here. Of course, I will price concessions than they. And gifts than they will be huge. Thanks

非常感谢,记下了.