请帮我修改现在过去式错误与拼写错误等……DearNatalie,I don’tknow one but this seems like the last letter you’ll get from me,so I wouldhave lot’s of things to talk about with you.We had moved to Alcatraze for halfof year now a

请帮我修改现在过去式错误与拼写错误等……DearNatalie,I don’tknow one but this seems like the last letter you’ll get from me,so I wouldhave lot’s of things to talk about with you.We had moved to Alcatraze for halfof year now a
请帮我修改现在过去式错误与拼写错误等……
DearNatalie,
I don’tknow one but this seems like the last letter you’ll get from me,so I wouldhave lot’s of things to talk about with you.We had moved to Alcatraze for halfof year now and do you like here?Alternatively,do you miss our old home?Thereare lot’s of questions I want to ask but it's gonna be too more for me to writeout and for you to write it back,so I’ll just be simple.
Thefirst thing I want to talk about is what had happened on the day of yourbirthday.Which should be 16th years old but for “real” 10.I betmom had felt a little bit sad about what I had done,what she said as creatinga disturbance.However,I am just telling the truth instead of being a nerd andlie with them about your age.
I hopeyou won’t mind that,or do you think I had rubbed your bithday?I am sorry ofwhat I had done,please don’t mind because if it’s not on your birthday then itwill lose it’s “power”:to let mom know how big the problem is.
Have agood night sleep,Nat!
-- Moose
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请帮我修改现在过去式错误与拼写错误等……DearNatalie,I don’tknow one but this seems like the last letter you’ll get from me,so I wouldhave lot’s of things to talk about with you.We had moved to Alcatraze for halfof year now a
DearNatalie,
I don’t know one but this seems like the last letter you’ll get from me,so I will have lots of things to talk about with you.We had moved to Alcatraze for half a year now and do you like there?Alternatively,do you miss our old home?There are lot’s of questions I want to ask but it's gonna be too more for me to write and for you to write it back,so I’ll just be simple.
The first thing I want to talk about is what happened on the your birthday,on which you should be 16th years old but for “real” 10.I bet mom felt a little bit sad about what I had done.What she said had created some disturbance.However,I aws just telling the truth instead of being a nerd and lied to them about your age.
I hope you won’t mind that,or do you think I had rubbed your bithday?I am sorry for what I had done,please don’t be sad because if it’s not on your birthday then it would lose its “power”:to let mom know how big the problem is.
Have a good night sleep,Nat!