这两句话有错吗?Kate,one of us,played an increasingly important role inthe Single’s day that called her boyfriend and told him that they just broke upfor one day in order to satisfy the needs of Single’s Day.I will never forgetthe day when
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这两句话有错吗?Kate,one of us,played an increasingly important role inthe Single’s day that called her boyfriend and told him that they just broke upfor one day in order to satisfy the needs of Single’s Day.I will never forgetthe day when
这两句话有错吗?
Kate,one of us,played an increasingly important role in
the Single’s day that called her boyfriend and told him that they just broke up
for one day in order to satisfy the needs of Single’s Day.
I will never forget
the day when we four girls
reach an absolute consensus on having a special day on thecoming Single’s Day.
这两句话有错吗?Kate,one of us,played an increasingly important role inthe Single’s day that called her boyfriend and told him that they just broke upfor one day in order to satisfy the needs of Single’s Day.I will never forgetthe day when
个人意见请参考;
第一句话,你用that引导定语从句是错误的,因为先行词和动作执行内容不一致,不妨改成：Kate,one of us,played an increasingly important role in the Single’s day and she called her boyfriend and told him that they just broke up for one day in order to satisfy the need of Single’s Day.(need是不需要加“s”的）
第二句话 will never forget the day when we four girls reach an absolute consensus on having a special day with the coming of Single“s Day.
就算没有语法错误，也绝对不算好句子。读了两遍，都没弄懂你在说什么。
你不介意就发下中文，我帮你看看。kate，我们中的一个，在光棍节起到越来越重要的作用，为了符合光棍节的要求，打电话给他的男朋友说他们在光棍节分手一天。 我永远不会忘记我们四个女孩取得一致意见为将要来临的光棍节。 大概是这样吧。 第二句是the coming，不是thecoming。打错了。Kate, one ...
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就算没有语法错误，也绝对不算好句子。读了两遍，都没弄懂你在说什么。
你不介意就发下中文，我帮你看看。
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WTF??
没错啊，写得挺好的啊