求助英语短文改错...Mary and her boyfriend just returned back from their holiday last night.Tiring and hungry,they went to a restaurant.They didn’t notice the young man watching them while they were eating.Suddenly,the lights went out and th

求助英语短文改错...Mary and her boyfriend just returned back from their holiday last night.Tiring and hungry,they went to a restaurant.They didn’t notice the young man watching them while they were eating.Suddenly,the lights went out and th
求助英语短文改错...
Mary and her boyfriend just returned back from their holiday
last night.Tiring and hungry,they went to a restaurant.They didn’t
notice the young man watching them while they were eating.Suddenly,
the lights went out and the whole room was in completely darkness.
Everyone heard a scream.After a while the lights came on.Mary cried again,saying if her necklace was gone.The waitress closed the
door and the manager calls the police.Soon a policeman arrived and searched the room carefully,and he didn’t find the necklace.The
manager looked every face,walked up to the young man,picked up his soup,and poured them on the ground.On the ground was the necklace.

求助英语短文改错...Mary and her boyfriend just returned back from their holiday last night.Tiring and hungry,they went to a restaurant.They didn’t notice the young man watching them while they were eating.Suddenly,the lights went out and th
行1 back多余
行2 tiring改成tired
行3 the改成a
行4 completely改成complete
行5 on改成back
行6 if改成that
行7 calls改成called
行8 and改成but
行9 looked后加上at
行10 them改成it

Mary and her boyfriend just returned from their holiday
last night. Tired and hungry, they went to a restaurant. They didn’t
notice a young man watching them while they were eating....

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Mary and her boyfriend just returned from their holiday
last night. Tired and hungry, they went to a restaurant. They didn’t
notice a young man watching them while they were eating. Suddenly,
the lights went out and the whole room was in complete darkness.
Everyone heard a scream. After a while the lights came on. Mary cried again, saying that her necklace was gone. The waitress closed the
door and the manager called the police. Soon a policeman arrived and searched the room carefully, and he didn’t find the necklace. The
manager looked at every face, walked up to the young man, picked up his soup, and poured it on the ground. On the ground was the necklace.

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returned (back)
tiring 改成tired
the young man 改成 a young man
completely 改成complete
came on 改成was on
if 改成that
calls 改成called
looked every face改成looked at every face
poured them on.. 改成poured it ...

1去掉back
2tiring改成tired
3在notice后加that
4completely改成complete
5came on改成came back
6if改成that
7calls改成called
8and改成but
9looked后加at
10them改成it

1.去掉returned back换成came back或只放back或只放returned
2.Tiring换成Tired或是Exhausted
3.young man后面加who was，前面的the才能成立
4.Suddenly可以换成Out of blue(Suddenly没错)
5.completely换complete
6.Everyone he...

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1.去掉returned back换成came back或只放back或只放returned
2.Tiring换成Tired或是Exhausted
3.young man后面加who was，前面的the才能成立
4.Suddenly可以换成Out of blue(Suddenly没错)
5.completely换complete
6.Everyone heard a scream.可以换成The screams filled the room.
7.came on换成were on again
8.去掉again和逗号换and
9.if换that
10.calls换called
11.Soon,
12.didn't可以换成can't
13.The manager looked every face,换成The manager took a look at everyone in the room
14.picked up his soup, and poured them on the ground.可以换成picked up/raised up his bowl and poured the soup on the ground.
15.On the ground was the necklace.可以换成There was the necklace on the ground.
我的英文也不怎么样，但希望能帮到你

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