Mr.Smith,tiring of living in his house in the countryside,wanted to sell it and buy the better one.He was notsuccess though he tried to sell it for a long time.Finally,Mr.Smith had no choice but turn to an agent to solvethe problem.Just a few of days

Mr.Smith,tiring of living in his house in the countryside,wanted to sell it and buy the better one.He was notsuccess though he tried to sell it for a long time.Finally,Mr.Smith had no choice but turn to an agent to solvethe problem.Just a few of days
Mr.Smith,tiring of living in his house in the countryside,
wanted to sell it and buy the better one.He was not
success though he tried to sell it for a long time.Finally,
Mr.Smith had no choice but turn to an agent to solve
the problem.Just a few of days later,Mr.Smith saw a
very attractive photograph of his house with a wonderful
description of it's garden in an expensive magazine.After reading
the advertisement,he decides not to sell his house any more,
but he hurriedly telephoned the agent and said to him,"I'm sure
my house is just the house which i want to live all my life."
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Mr.Smith,tiring of living in his house in the countryside,wanted to sell it and buy the better one.He was notsuccess though he tried to sell it for a long time.Finally,Mr.Smith had no choice but turn to an agent to solvethe problem.Just a few of days
1.tiring--tired 跟后面wanted 是并列的,应该用同一时态,发出者都是一人
2.the---a 买一个更好的,并没有特指,多以用a
3success--successful it is +形容词
4turn--turned 时态一致,全文都是过去式
5of(去掉） a few 一些...直接修饰可数名词
6对的
7it's--its of 后面应接名词或者动词ING形式.如果是it's 就是一个句子了,肯定是错的
8decides--decided 时态一致
9but--and 在这里Mr smith 已经决定不卖房子了,跟上个小分句并无转折之意.是他决定了不卖,接着打电话
10.live 后加in 固定搭配live in the house.

1tired 2the 改为a 3success 改为successful
4but 后加to 5of去掉8decides 改为decided 9改为 so
10 live 后加in
6和7我真的卟知道了 但其他我可以确定

共10行。
1.tired of living
be tired of ..厌倦某事物
2.the-a
a/an+比较级+单数可数名词”表示“一个更……的人/物”
a sharper knife更锋利的刀
被比较者特指时，比较级前加定冠词“the”：
Which is the younger one,jim or mike ?
3....

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共10行。
1.tired of living
be tired of ..厌倦某事物
2.the-a
a/an+比较级+单数可数名词”表示“一个更……的人/物”
a sharper knife更锋利的刀
被比较者特指时，比较级前加定冠词“the”：
Which is the younger one,jim or mike ?
3.success-successful
4.but 后加 to
这里考察 have no choice but的用法
5.去掉of
7.it's -his
8.decides-decided
9.but -and
10.live后加 in

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tiring→tired（try的过去式 基于整句的时态为过去时）
buy→bought（and并列结构 时态一致 wanted为过去时）
success→successful（be动词后跟形容词）
turn →to turn（have no choice but to do sth固定搭配）
of →删除
it's →its（它的 ti's表示它是）

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tiring→tired（try的过去式 基于整句的时态为过去时）
buy→bought（and并列结构 时态一致 wanted为过去时）
success→successful（be动词后跟形容词）
turn →to turn（have no choice but to do sth固定搭配）
of →删除
it's →its（它的 ti's表示它是）
decides→decided（整段时态为过去时）
but→and（表顺接 but表转折）
which→where（in which=where， I want to live all my life in the house从句缺少地点状语因此应选择where）

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