高一英语短文改错题Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday morning.I'd like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents.They were very old and unluckily they are not in a good health recently.My

高一英语短文改错题Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday morning.I'd like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents.They were very old and unluckily they are not in a good health recently.My
高一英语短文改错题
Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday morning.I'd like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents.They were very old and unluckily they are not in a good health recently.My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised visit them with me this Saturday .My mother said we will stay at my grandparents' the whole weekend.So I'm real sorry I can't attend your party.I hope you will understand all this.Here I wish you a lot fun on your birthday and much happy returns of the day.
谁能够准确的改错,共10处错误,请详细的一一指明并加以改正,可以增加,删除或修改,若全正确,我会追70分的!

高一英语短文改错题Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday morning.I'd like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents.They were very old and unluckily they are not in a good health recently.My
Thank you very much for (invite-inviting) me to your birthday party (in-on) Saturday morning.I'd like to come (and_but) I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents. They (were-are) very old and unluckily they are not in(去掉 a ）good health recently. My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised（加to） visit them with me this Saturday .My mother said we （will-would） stay at my grandparents' the whole weekend. So I'm （real——really） sorry I can't attend your party. I hope you will understand all （this-these）. Here I wish you a lot （of) fun on your birthday and much happy returns of the day.

改正在括号处标明，共十处错误!
更正楼上最后一处改错。
Thank you very much for (inviting) me to your birthday party (on) Saturday morning. I'd like to come (but) I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents. The...

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改正在括号处标明，共十处错误!
更正楼上最后一处改错。
Thank you very much for (inviting) me to your birthday party (on) Saturday morning. I'd like to come (but) I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents. They (are) very old and unluckily they are not in (去掉a) good health recently. My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised (加入to) visit them with me this Saturday. My mother said we (would) stay at my grandparents' the whole weekend. So I'm (really) sorry I can't attend your party. I hope you will understand all (these). Here I wish you a lot fun on your birthday and (many) happy returns of the day.

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