纠正语法错误~可改词 大致意思在即可~Music for our life,it is a drug to create text,is also awaken the elixir of the soul.Accompanied by the music,it will never be lonely.In the sea of music,we are well drifting boat,comfortable and pea

纠正语法错误~可改词 大致意思在即可~Music for our life,it is a drug to create text,is also awaken the elixir of the soul.Accompanied by the music,it will never be lonely.In the sea of music,we are well drifting boat,comfortable and pea
纠正语法错误~可改词 大致意思在即可~
Music for our life,it is a drug to create text,is also awaken the elixir of the soul.Accompanied by the music,it will never be lonely.In the sea of music,we are well drifting boat,comfortable and peaceful.Only music can let us quiet erratic soul,settle.Every kind of music,classical music,religious music,pop music,heavy metal music,rock music,electronic music,jazz,basket,can give us is not the same as it props up a stretch of the sky.Let's relax,let us free,let's fly.I like music,whenever I'm tired,every time I good vibes,it is to share with my partner.It can persuade me to calm,also can shock I rose up in the depression.The magic of music have a kind of never disappear.For me,it is warm,is to save,is a passion,is the hope.I am glad,although not understand music,but enjoy the happiness of the gift of it.Joy and pain of heart,in music,and all is lost.Once again,with music put yourself into notes ups and downs.

纠正语法错误~可改词 大致意思在即可~Music for our life,it is a drug to create text,is also awaken the elixir of the soul.Accompanied by the music,it will never be lonely.In the sea of music,we are well drifting boat,comfortable and pea
Music,like vitamin to our life,is the soul elixir.One will never be lonely when accompanied by music.Boating in the lake of music we may find comfort and peace because it calms our erratic souls down.No matter what kind of music it is,classical,religious,pop,heavy metal,rock,electronic,jazz,basket,the feeling it gives us will never be the same when it goes off in our mind.Let's turn on your player and free your soul for a while.I am a music fan for myself.Whenever I'm tired,I share vibes with my partner.It calms me down,sometimes rose me up from deep depression.One magic of the music is it never disappear.For me,it is warmth,saving,passion,and hope.I am glad,without a full understanding to every piece of music though,to enjoy the happiness it gives me.Joy and pain in our heart,when listening to music,are all gone.You will find yourself busy hiking the mountains of scales and volumn.
你原来的文章都是汉语思维写的英语句子,这里我都修改了一下,

你这个连英语都算不上， 还哪来的改语法呀。 Gibberish都算不上， 纯粹就机器语