帮我看一下有没有语法错误,英语Good afternoon everybody.As we know,there are many kind of foods in the world.Indor to describe easily,I dive them in to two parts,eastern foods and western foods.Let us start with the eastern foods.I think

帮我看一下有没有语法错误,英语Good afternoon everybody.As we know,there are many kind of foods in the world.Indor to describe easily,I dive them in to two parts,eastern foods and western foods.Let us start with the eastern foods.I think
帮我看一下有没有语法错误,英语
Good afternoon everybody.As we know,there are many kind of foods in the world.Indor to describe easily,I dive them in to two parts,eastern foods and western foods.Let us start with the eastern foods.I think chinese foods can be on behalf of eastern foods.Do not you feel hungry when you see the dilous chinese foods?Our chinese has traditional culture,which contains traditional food.Zongzi is a typical traditionalfood,which is made of rice and meat and anything you can image.Next to western foods,I choose the america as the deputy.Amercians are interested in fast foods such as hamburgs and fresh fries for their fast life style.These foods can help them save as mach time as possible and give them more energy.Amercians do not have many skills for cooking liks chinese.By the way,They are good at making chocolate and cakes.That is the reason why most americians are so fat.On the contrary,chineses pay more attention to how much nutrition the foods have.Finally,I show you two pictures,which person do you prefer.帮我看看有什么语法错误,或者哪些句子怎样写更漂亮

帮我看一下有没有语法错误,英语Good afternoon everybody.As we know,there are many kind of foods in the world.Indor to describe easily,I dive them in to two parts,eastern foods and western foods.Let us start with the eastern foods.I think
第一行 many kinds of in order to
第二行 dive 改为divide 第四行 dilous 改为delicious
第五行 image 改为imagine
第六行America 改为American 第七行 Mach 改为 much
第八行 liks 改为 like
最后一行 which picture

many kinds of foods
chinese foods can be on behalf of the earstern foods 这句话是说中国食物可以代表西方食物吗？
our chinese has traditional culture 可以不带our 直接是 china has a troditioanl culture,
by the ...

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many kinds of foods
chinese foods can be on behalf of the earstern foods 这句话是说中国食物可以代表西方食物吗？
our chinese has traditional culture 可以不带our 直接是 china has a troditioanl culture,
by the way 是顺便说一下的意思， 作者是想表达，美国人做饭技巧不如中国， 但他们擅长 做巧克力和蛋糕，应该用however 这样的转折词。
finally 最终， 最后可以用 in the end ;
show you two pictures, which one do you prefer .

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many kinds of foods中food是不可数名词不应该加s
dive应该 改为divide dilous 应该改为delicious image 应该改为imagine
America 应该改为American Mach 应该改为 much liks 应该改为 like

楼主好,

many kind of →many kinds of .Indor to →in order to
in to→into
dilous →delicious our chinese has traditional culture,which contains traditional ...

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楼主好,

many kind of →many kinds of .Indor to →in order to
in to→into
dilous →delicious our chinese has traditional culture,which contains traditional food→ We Chinese have the traditional culture which contains the traditional food.
Zongzi is a typical traditionalfood,which is made of rice and meat and anything you can image→Zongzi is a typically (副词修饰形容词) traditiona lfood which is made of rice and meat and anything you can image.
Next to western foods→ Next to the western foods, (楼主都不喜欢用冠词的..多读多背点东西,培养下语感)
Amercians do not have many skills for cooking liks chinese→Amercians do not have as many skills as Chinese do.
Finally,I show you two pictures,which person do you prefer→Finally,I would like to show you two pictures,which one do you prefer?

希望对你有帮助^^

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1.kind of foods 改为 kinds of food, 原因：food食物--不可数
2.in order to 为了 原因：拼写错误
3.dive改为divide into.
4.foods-food拼写错误
5.Chinese-china中国， our去掉
6.America美国
7.mach--much
8.liks--l...

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1.kind of foods 改为 kinds of food, 原因：food食物--不可数
2.in order to 为了 原因：拼写错误
3.dive改为divide into.
4.foods-food拼写错误
5.Chinese-china中国， our去掉
6.America美国
7.mach--much
8.liks--like
9.by the way 改成 but 表示转折
10. American
11.我觉得用这个好些Which one you like?
只是个人意见，如有不妥请多包涵~~~~~

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