帮我改下短文改错.1.I`m glad to hear from you'll come to Hangzhou for a visit.2.Hangzhou is beautiful city on coast of China,by3.the Qiantang River.It is said Marco Polo,a well-known4.Italian traveler once visited Hangzhou,but was struck by it

帮我改下短文改错.1.I`m glad to hear from you'll come to Hangzhou for a visit.2.Hangzhou is beautiful city on coast of China,by3.the Qiantang River.It is said Marco Polo,a well-known4.Italian traveler once visited Hangzhou,but was struck by it
帮我改下短文改错.
1.I`m glad to hear from you'll come to Hangzhou for a visit.
2.Hangzhou is beautiful city on coast of China,by
3.the Qiantang River.It is said Marco Polo,a well-known
4.Italian traveler once visited Hangzhou,but was struck by its
5.beauty.It is one of the eldest cities with a long history.
6.Hangzhou is the capital of several dynasties.so it has many
7.famous temples and old tower.The West Lake,with green hills
8.on three sides and many beautiful parks around,attracting many
9.visitors at home and abroad.I think you'll be happy during our stay
10.in Hangzhou.I`m looking forward to see you here soon.

帮我改下短文改错.1.I`m glad to hear from you'll come to Hangzhou for a visit.2.Hangzhou is beautiful city on coast of China,by3.the Qiantang River.It is said Marco Polo,a well-known4.Italian traveler once visited Hangzhou,but was struck by it
楼主第二行应该漏打了!
1.I'm glad to hear (that) you'll come to Hangzhou for a visit.
hear后面是一个以that引导的宾语从句,且that可以省略.
2.Hangzhou is (加入a) beautiful city on (加入the) coast of China,by
名词前的冠词不能省略.
3.the Qiantang River.It is said (加入that) Marco Polo,a well-known
此that不能省略.
4.Italian traveler,once visited Hangzhou,(and) was struck by its
was struck和visited之间是顺承关系,不是转折关系.
5.beauty.It is one of the (oldest) cities with a long history.
eldest一般只用于人之间的辈分/年龄对比.
6.Hangzhou (was) the capital of several dynasties,so it has many
杭州过去是若干个朝代的首都,但是现在不是,所以be动词用过去式was.
7.famous temples and old (towers).The West Lake,with green hills
tower和前面的temple一样,用复数形式.
8.on three sides and many beautiful parks around,(attracts) many
attract在此句中做谓语,一般现在时,用三单形式.
9.visitors at home and abroad.I think you'll be happy during （your) stay
是对方的“your”在杭州的逗留（期间）.
10.in Hangzhou.I'm looking forward to (seeing) you here soon.
固定短语：look forward to doing sth“渴望做某事”,其中的to为介词,不是不定式符号.

你的题目太乱，没法做
1。from---that
2。 is 后加a
3。said后加that
4。but---and
5。没错
6。is---was
7。tower--towers
8。attracting--attracts
9。our--your
10，see--seeing