帮忙改一篇英语短文 My view on “Give people more money”Through newspaper I learn that the Ministry of labor and cosocial security is lauaching a five-point program to raise employee income.It has been welcome by me and many other people.B

帮忙改一篇英语短文 My view on “Give people more money”Through newspaper I learn that the Ministry of labor and cosocial security is lauaching a five-point program to raise employee income.It has been welcome by me and many other people.B
帮忙改一篇英语短文
My view on “Give people more money”
Through newspaper I learn that the Ministry of labor and cosocial security is lauaching a five-point program to raise employee income.It has been welcome by me and many other people.But experience worry the salary incrise wound weaten China’s international competitiveness.I think the worry is unnecessary.Wokers’salaries should retain a proper ratio with economic growth..The economy will be hurt by increased labor costs if the ratio is too high while consumption will suffer if salaries are too low.As we know salaries in China have been relatively low for a long time.For example,When my mother's sister and the uncle marries,took the middle school teachers the uncle,his wages only has 800 Yuan.After nine years,his wages has not surpassed 1,500 Yuan.The time in vicissitude,the economy is developing,but people's wage level very was still low.
I get a figure from the intenational labor organization recentily figure indicated that the catita output in China grew percent between 2000 and 2005,but salaries didn’t have comparable growth.I believe it’s the cause of the long-term sluggish consumption as a report of worldbank.The report said that low consumption was the result of low salaries rather rhan the high savings rate of Chinese families.We all knew that,our government very diligently stimulates the expense,but our country consumption level was still very low in recent years.For example,Was opposite to Dalian's economical development,the Dalian people's wages are very still low.Very many people all want to have own house,but because the wages excessively is low,cannot bear the high quota the house price and the bank loan.As a turbine project specialized student,I pay attention to the Chinese seaman's wages continuously very much,as far as I know,although Chinese economy rapid development,but the Chinese seaman's wages was still very low.Therefore when I hearde that the government appear to the measure of raise the people's wages,I felt government very wise,I am very happy.
Finally,I believed,along with the Chinese economy more than 20 fast development,is the time lets achievement which the Chinese people enjoys promotes economic prosperity brings.

帮忙改一篇英语短文 My view on “Give people more money”Through newspaper I learn that the Ministry of labor and cosocial security is lauaching a five-point program to raise employee income.It has been welcome by me and many other people.B
Through newspaper I had learned that the Ministry of labor and cosocial security is lauaching a five-point program to raise employees' income.It had been welcomed by many people including me.But experts areworrying about the salary increase wound weaken China’s international competition.I think it is unnecessary.Wokers’salaries should retain a proper ratio with the economic development.The economy will be affected by increasing labor costs if the ratio is too high while consumption ratio will decreased if salaries are too low.As we know salaries in China have been relatively low for a long time.For example,When my mother's sister married with her husband as a middle school teachers whose wages are only approximate 800 Yuan.After nine years,his wages have not surpassed 1,500 Yuan yet.The economy has developed,but people's wage level was still very low.
I get a figure from the intenational labor organization recentily indicated that the catita(catita是什么?我没查到.) output in China grew percent（我不理解你grew percent是什么意思,翻了一倍?如果是翻了一倍的话应该说have become twiced） between 2000 and 2005,but salaries grows disproportionally.I believe that it caused the long-term sluggish consumption which had been recently reported by the worldbank.The report said that low consumption was the result of low salaries rather rhan the high savings rate of Chinese families.We all knew that,our government stimulates the expense diligently ,but country's consumption level is still very low in the recent years.For example,opposite to Dalian's economical development,citizens' wages are very still low.Huge amount of(Very many...同学,你真中国...) people wish to own houses,but they cannot afford the high quota the house price and the bank loan because of the low wages.As a turbine project specialized student,I have paid attention to the Chinese seaman's wages continuously,as far as I know,(although...but...同学.你真的有检查过你的文章吗...)compared with the economy rapid growth,the Chinese seaman's wages is still very low.Therefore when I heard that the government decided to raise people's wages,I am very happy and regard government's dicision as a very wise policy.
Finally,I believed that.对不起,之后我实在看不懂你写的了,麻烦你把中文写下来我再帮你翻.或者我随便帮你写个结尾吧.
Finally I strongly believed that it is time for the Chinese people reach a prosperous rewarding especially in the next few years with the rapid development of the economy guided by the government.