求大神帮我看看其中的错误 英语噢 今天写作文 the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet我写了一句 playing computer games online is not only bad for our eyes but also will waste a lot of time怎么订正?我用百度翻译

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求大神帮我看看其中的错误英语噢今天写作文theadvantagesanddisadvantagesoftheInternet我写了一句playingcomputergamesonlineisnoton

求大神帮我看看其中的错误 英语噢 今天写作文 the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet我写了一句 playing computer games online is not only bad for our eyes but also will waste a lot of time怎么订正?我用百度翻译
求大神帮我看看其中的错误 英语
噢 今天写作文 the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet
我写了一句 playing computer games online is not only bad for our eyes but also will waste a lot of time
怎么订正?
我用百度翻译翻译的那句话呀.
应该是语法错了

求大神帮我看看其中的错误 英语噢 今天写作文 the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet我写了一句 playing computer games online is not only bad for our eyes but also will waste a lot of time怎么订正?我用百度翻译
你所写的：playing computer games online is not only bad for our eyes but also will waste a lot of time
is要适合not only后面的词,也要适合but also后面的词.
is bad for..没错,但是is will waste...就不对了
所以可以把waste a lot of time改成一个名词：a waste of time
is a waste of time就没有语法错误了

应该是时态错了吧 前面的is就是一般现在时 后面的will 是一般将来时 改成also wastes吧

not only .... but also .....后面接的东西要一致

playing computer games online is not only bad for our eyes but also is a waste of time.

对着的啊，难道老师给你改的错？

Playing online games is not only damaging to eyes but also a waste of time.

把“will waste"改为'wasting"，或者把“but also”后半段改为“a waste of time","not only....but also"前后时态保持一致

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