哪位英语高手帮我看下有没有语法错误（急）The world will never be the same once you have seen it through the eyes of Forrest Gump.Forrest Gump was born in a small town in Alabama in the USA.He only has an IQ of 75.His mother and his

哪位英语高手帮我看下有没有语法错误（急）The world will never be the same once you have seen it through the eyes of Forrest Gump.Forrest Gump was born in a small town in Alabama in the USA.He only has an IQ of 75.His mother and his
哪位英语高手帮我看下有没有语法错误（急）
The world will never be the same once you have seen it through the eyes of Forrest Gump.Forrest Gump was born in a small town in Alabama in the USA.He only has an IQ of 75.His mother and his friend Jenny always encourage him to live as an ordinary person.
To them surprised,Forrest has “slow” in head but “quick” in running.His dramatic life begins when he runs onto a football field to escape his class bullies.He becomes a football star in a university.
After his graduation,he becomes a soldier.And join the war in Vietnam.After the war,he meets many famous people.
The movie is over,but I know that it won’t be over in everybody’s heart.
A loving and friendly dunce can also conquer the world.

哪位英语高手帮我看下有没有语法错误（急）The world will never be the same once you have seen it through the eyes of Forrest Gump.Forrest Gump was born in a small town in Alabama in the USA.He only has an IQ of 75.His mother and his
The world will never be the same once you (see) it through the eyes of Forrest Gump.Forrest Gump was born in a small town in Alabama in the USA.He only has an IQ of 75.His mother and his friend Jenny always encourage him to live as an ordinary person.
To (their) surprised,Forrest has (well developed body with simple mind).His dramatic life begins when he runs onto a football field to escape his class bullies.He becomes a football star in a university.
After his graduation,he becomes a soldier,(and joins) the war in Vietnam.After the war,he meets many famous people.
The movie is over,but I know that it won’t be over in everybody’s heart.
A loving and friendly dunce can also conquer the world.
不妥之处,已改,并用“（）”标出.

The world will never be the same once you have seen it through the eyes of Forrest Gump. Forrest Gump was born in a small town in Alabama in the USA. He only has an IQ of 75. His mother and his friend...

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The world will never be the same once you have seen it through the eyes of Forrest Gump. Forrest Gump was born in a small town in Alabama in the USA. He only has an IQ of 75. His mother and his friend Jenny always encourage him to live as an ordinary person.
To their surprise, Forrest is “slow” in head but “quick” in running. His dramatic life begins when he runs onto a football field to escape his class bullies. He becomes a football star in the university.
After his graduation, he becomes a soldier. And join in the war in Vietnam. After the war, he meets many famous people.
The movie is over, but I know that it won’t be over in everybody’s heart.
A loving and friendly dunce can also conquer the world.

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最明显的错误：
第二段开头：To them surprised, 应改成：To their surprise
第二段：has slow 改成：is slow
另外，时态感觉用过去时更好一些。如果不用过去时，第二段倒数第二句 And join the war in Vietnam 应改成：And joins the war in Vietnam
事实上，越战发生...

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最明显的错误：
第二段开头：To them surprised, 应改成：To their surprise
第二段：has slow 改成：is slow
另外，时态感觉用过去时更好一些。如果不用过去时，第二段倒数第二句 And join the war in Vietnam 应改成：And joins the war in Vietnam
事实上，越战发生在过去，所以，用过去时更妥当。

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