改英语作文,快!今晚答复的好的我会追加悬赏分有语法错误和用此不准确,帮忙把不对和不通的地方改一下,做一点特殊标注,要快!明天交作业.Our teacher thinks we have had a wonderful holiday, but in fact, o

改英语作文,快!今晚答复的好的我会追加悬赏分有语法错误和用此不准确,帮忙把不对和不通的地方改一下,做一点特殊标注,要快!明天交作业.Our teacher thinks we have had a wonderful holiday, but in fact, o
改英语作文,快!今晚答复的好的我会追加悬赏分
有语法错误和用此不准确,帮忙把不对和不通的地方改一下,做一点特殊标注,要快!明天交作业.Our teacher thinks we have had a wonderful holiday, but in fact, our holiday was boring and busy. As you know, I don’t it!
Every day, I got up early and made my breakfast by myself, after having the quick breakfast; I went to the English club. I finished it about twelve o’clock. In the afternoon, I enjoyed myself with my book and the homework; I played with the pen and the eraser; I talked with the table and the chair. How callosity the life is!
Naturally, I don’t like the holiday, in contrast with our school life, I love the school life best. I would never forget this busy holiday!

改英语作文,快!今晚答复的好的我会追加悬赏分有语法错误和用此不准确,帮忙把不对和不通的地方改一下,做一点特殊标注,要快!明天交作业.Our teacher thinks we have had a wonderful holiday, but in fact, o
I love the school life best.(best->better)
our holiday was boring and busy.(our ->my )
As you know,I don't it!(In fact ,I don't like it !)（如此改,因为我们怎么会知道你不喜欢这个假期呢!）
after having the quick breakfast(after having the
breakfast quickly)
How callosity the life is !(callsoity->pitiless)
I love the school life best.(best->better)

Our teacher (thought) we have had a wonderful holiday, but in fact, my holiday was boring and busy.(...删去) I don’t (like) it!
Every day, I got up early and made my breakfast by myself, after havi...

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Our teacher (thought) we have had a wonderful holiday, but in fact, my holiday was boring and busy.(...删去) I don’t (like) it!
Every day, I got up early and made my breakfast by myself, after having (a) quick breakfast; I went to the English club. I finished it （at） about twelve o’clock. In the afternoon, I enjoyed myself with my book and the homework; I played with the pen and the eraser; I talked with the table and the chair. How (callously) the life is!
Naturally, (I prefer school life to holidays cause wehave more fun with friends in the school.) I won't forget this busy holiday!
不是很肯定啊...作参考吧...

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