谁能帮我写份英语作文呢?this ！ 马上写，写完了还给悬赏

谁能帮我写份英语作文呢?this ！ 马上写，写完了还给悬赏
谁能帮我写份英语作文呢?
this ！ 马上写，写完了还给悬赏

谁能帮我写份英语作文呢?this ！ 马上写，写完了还给悬赏
The data showed above present two surveys about what do girl students look for in love and life.
In the first chart,the question is:What do you look for first in a boyfriend?It is clear that most girl students choose from Appearance,Abilities and Personality.The least choosing one is Economic status.For Common interest and goals,17% of girls think it is important between a relationship with boys.This chart shows the reality pretty well actually.Most of girls are focusing on the appearance and personality nowadays.
In the second chart,the data are presented in a pie chart.The survey asked ‘What is the most important for a happy life?’.Most of girls decided to choose marriage and family.They think having a perfect marriage and a nice family is the most important thing in the world.Career is the following the decision for girls.Then it is the money.3.0% data shows that there are other things that these girl students care about.

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我帮你修改了一下，以后注意 名词前面的冠词使用 还有这句话我不明白你想表达什么，也帮你改了 “17% of girls think it is important between a relationship with boys” pretty well actually 重复了
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楼上的
我帮你修改了一下，以后注意 名词前面的冠词使用 还有这句话我不明白你想表达什么，也帮你改了 “17% of girls think it is important between a relationship with boys” pretty well actually 重复了
还有许多错误，以后写完要注意检查，就这样了
The data showed above presents two surveys about what do girl students looking for in love and life.
In the first chart, the question is: What do you look for first in a boyfriend? It is clear that most girl students choose from Appearance, Abilities and Personality. The least chosen one is Economic status. There are 17% of the girls chosen the Common interest and goal which they might think is really important. This chart shows the reality pretty well . Most of the girls emphasized on the appearance and personality when they choosing boy friends nowadays.
In the second chart, the data are presented in a pie chart. The survey asked ‘What is the most important for a happy life?’. Most of the girls decided to choose "marriage and family". They think having a perfect marriage and a nice family is the most important thing in the world. Career is the following decision for girls. Then the money matters. 3.0% of the girl care about other things.

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