英语帮忙检查有没有错误,I think my cousin should go abroad to study for a degree.In this society if you don't have a advanced degree you can't find a good job.Going to abroad which can improve you knowledge and let you see widely.So i sugge

英语帮忙检查有没有错误,I think my cousin should go abroad to study for a degree.In this society if you don't have a advanced degree you can't find a good job.Going to abroad which can improve you knowledge and let you see widely.So i sugge
英语帮忙检查有没有错误,
I think my cousin should go abroad to study for a degree.In this society if you don't have a advanced degree you can't find a good job.Going to abroad which can improve you knowledge and let you see widely.So i suggest my cousin go to abroad.
it in summer Li hua passed a swimming pool suddenly he heared someone shoting help.soon he turned his head to the pool.He found a child droped into water.Immediately he went to the pool and jumped into the water to save the child.Finally the child was saved successful
One day i was doing my homework when my mom came back and she said "i am tired".I anwsered" I don't think so.You just go to work!" Then she went to the kitchen for preparing dinner.
A few days later,my two classmates and i took part in a activity which was working in the New China Childen's Store for one week.The first day when i worked there i didn't know how to do.But shortly i have knew what i should do and at the same time I knew this work wasn't easy.Everyday i will take the toys which was the childen likes to them.Some times they maybe change their mind seversl times.When a day'work finished i felt so tired.
I think our parent must be more tired then ours when they finished their work.So we should let them take some rest and do something what we can.

英语帮忙检查有没有错误,I think my cousin should go abroad to study for a degree.In this society if you don't have a advanced degree you can't find a good job.Going to abroad which can improve you knowledge and let you see widely.So i sugge
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I think my cousin should go abroad to study for a degree.In this society,if you don't have an advanced degree,then you can't find a good job.Going abroad can improve your knowledge and let you see the world in a wider perspective.Thus,I suggest that my cousin go abroad to study.
During the summer,Li Hua passed by a swimming pool one day when he suddenly heard someone shouting help.He quickly turned his head to the pool and found a child drowning in the water.He immediately jumped into the poor to save the child.Finally the child was successfully saved.
I was doing my homework one day when my mom came back and said "I am tired".I anwsered "I don't think so.All you did was go to work!" Then she went to the kitchen to prepare dinner.
A few days later,my two classmates and I took part in an activity which was to work in the New China Childen's Store for one week.The first day when I worked there I didn't know what to do.But shortly aftewards,I knew what I should do and at the same time,learned that this job wasn't easy.I have to take the toys that the children likes to them.Sometimes,they'll even change their minds several times.I feel really tired when it's the end of the day.I think our parents must be more tired then we are when they are done with work.Thus,we should let them rest and help them in whatever way we can.

错误太多...分太少..睡觉了
你这个是翻译软件吧?太差了....

第一小段中
第二行把going to 改成 go
第二行把you 改成 your
第三行把go to 改成 go
（第一段你写你的叔叔时一会是“我叔叔”怎么怎么样，一会是“你”怎么怎么样，我看着怪怪的，是不是修改一下啊？）
第二小段中
第一行把it去掉，如果享用强调句式的话可以改成
It is in summer that Lihua p...

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第一小段中
第二行把going to 改成 go
第二行把you 改成 your
第三行把go to 改成 go
（第一段你写你的叔叔时一会是“我叔叔”怎么怎么样，一会是“你”怎么怎么样，我看着怪怪的，是不是修改一下啊？）
第二小段中
第一行把it去掉，如果享用强调句式的话可以改成
It is in summer that Lihua passed a swimming pool……
第一行在suddenly后短了引导词when
第一行shoting改成shouting
第二行droped 和 water间加冠词the
第三行successful要修饰动词，所以用它的副词形式——successfully
第三小段中
第一行中把she去掉
第二行中把for preparing 改成 to prepare the
（ I don't think so. You just go to work 这句话表意不是很清楚，是不是修改一下啊？）
第四小段中
activity前的a改成an
第三行I have known，不是I have knew
Everyday i will take the toys which was the childen likes to them 这个句子时态错了，而且动词也用错了，可以改成Everday I have to take the toys which were the chirden's choise.
When a day'work finished i felt so tired. 也感觉怪怪的，改成这样比较好——After one day's work ,I felt very tired.
I think our parent must be more tired then ours when they finished their work. So we should let them take some rest and do something what we can.这句话句意不错 ，可惜语法上欠佳，可以改成这样——I think our parents must be more tried.So we should let them take some rest and do everything we can

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第二段第一行one day和when之间应该有逗号
第三段i answered, 感觉用 i replied
除了这两个地方,感觉2楼翻译的很好

I think my cousin should go abroad to study for a degree. If you don't have a high degree in this society, you can't find a good job. Going abroad can improve your knowledge and let you see the world ...

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I think my cousin should go abroad to study for a degree. If you don't have a high degree in this society, you can't find a good job. Going abroad can improve your knowledge and let you see the world better. So I suggest that my cousin go abroad to study.
One day in the summer, Li Hua passed by a swimming pool when he suddenly heard someone shouting help. He quickly turned around and found a child drowning in the water. He immediately jumped into the pool to rescue the child. Finally the child was safe.
I was doing my homework one day when my mom came back and said: "I am tired". I replied: "I don't think so. All you did was go to work!" Then she went to the kitchen to prepare the dinner.
A few days later, my two classmates and I took part in an activity in the New China Childen's Store for one week. The first day when I worked there I didn't know what to do. But shortly aftewards, I knew what I should do and learned that this job wasn't easy. I had to get the toys that the children liked for them. Sometimes, they would even change their minds several times. I felt really tired at the end of the day. I think our parents must be more tired then we are when they finish their work. Therefore, we should let them rest and help them in every way possible.

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