英语语法检查My hometownMy hometown——Jiaxing,in the northeast of Zhejiang,with many sceneries and something specials.It has more than three million people.Every people is very friengly.It is famous for the South Lake.Some of Jiaxing special

英语语法检查My hometownMy hometown——Jiaxing,in the northeast of Zhejiang,with many sceneries and something specials.It has more than three million people.Every people is very friengly.It is famous for the South Lake.Some of Jiaxing special
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My hometown
My hometown——Jiaxing,in the northeast of Zhejiang,with many sceneries and something specials.
It has more than three million people.Every people is very friengly.
It is famous for the South Lake.Some of Jiaxing special food,like Zongzi and peaches.They are decilious.
This is my hometown,I love it.

英语语法检查My hometownMy hometown——Jiaxing,in the northeast of Zhejiang,with many sceneries and something specials.It has more than three million people.Every people is very friengly.It is famous for the South Lake.Some of Jiaxing special
第一句缺少系动词,而且形容词special后面加S让人费解.改为：
My hometown——Jiaxing,is in the northeast of Zhejiang,with many sceneries and something special.
第二句单词拼写错误,友好的是friendly,而非friengly.此处没有语法错误,但是感觉很生硬.
第三句：你想说的是嘉兴的特产像粽子和桃子之类很美味,句子翻译错误,中间没有系动词,最好改为：
Some of Jiaxing special food,like Zongzi and peaches are decilious.
第四句：两个完整的句子是不能没有连接词就这样重叠的,改为：
This is my hometown,and I love it.
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My hometown
My hometown——Jiaxing，in the northeast of Zhejiang，has many sceneries and something specials。
there are more than three million people.Every one is very friendly.
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My hometown
My hometown——Jiaxing，in the northeast of Zhejiang，has many sceneries and something specials。
there are more than three million people.Every one is very friendly.
It is famous for the South Lake.Some of Jiaxing's special food,like Zongzi and peaches, are decilious.
This is my hometown. I love it.

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My hometown
Jiaxing,in the northeast of Zhejiang,with beautiful scenery and some special things,is my hometown.
The population of Jiaxing is more than three million.Everybody here is very ...

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My hometown
Jiaxing,in the northeast of Zhejiang,with beautiful scenery and some special things,is my hometown.
The population of Jiaxing is more than three million.Everybody here is very friendly.
It is famous for the South Lake.There are some special food in Jiaxing,like zongzi and peaches.They are delicious.
This is my hometown.I love it so much.

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第一句something改为some
第二句every people is very friengly. 改为 People here are very friendly.
其他都不错哦！