自己写了个英语短句,麻烦高手帮忙指出语法错误.或者有什么更好的表达方式,谢过了~selfless mother loveI can’t find a person like my mother,she always gives me the expensive gifts,but she buys a cheap clothes for hersel
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自己写了个英语短句,麻烦高手帮忙指出语法错误.或者有什么更好的表达方式,谢过了~selfless mother loveI can’t find a person like my mother,she always gives me the expensive gifts,but she buys a cheap clothes for hersel
自己写了个英语短句,麻烦高手帮忙指出语法错误.或者有什么更好的表达方式,谢过了~
selfless mother love
I can’t find a person like my mother,she always gives me the expensive gifts,but she buys a cheap clothes for herself once a year.
No matter how tired she is ,if I want to do sth,she always play with me.
At last,I want to tell everybody my mother is good at everyting,she is amazing enough to protect me
自己写了个英语短句,麻烦高手帮忙指出语法错误.或者有什么更好的表达方式,谢过了~selfless mother loveI can’t find a person like my mother,she always gives me the expensive gifts,but she buys a cheap clothes for hersel
语法上没什么问题,但写得有点中国式了.
我试着修改一下：
I can't find a person like my mother who always gives me many expensive gifts,but she often buys cheap chothes for herself,Besides, she always satisfies me no matter how hard for her,And she plays with me no matter how tired she is.
At last,I want to tell all of you that my mother is good at everything in my eyes,
最后一句,我不太明白你想表达些什么,觉得句子前后不太连贯.
The Selfless Maternal Love
I can’t find a person like my mother, who is always giving me expensive gifts, but only buys herself a piece of cheap clothing once a year.
No matter how tired she ...
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The Selfless Maternal Love
I can’t find a person like my mother, who is always giving me expensive gifts, but only buys herself a piece of cheap clothing once a year.
No matter how tired she is , she will satisfy me if I want to do sth.
At last, I want to tell everybody my mother is very capable, she is strong enough to protect me.
I love my mother!
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太汉语化了~~~ 太口语化了~~~~
有点中国式的写法了。可以找些国外的原版书阅读，增强语感。
grammar没什么问题，就是内容好像有点问题吧