这篇英语作文有没有语法错误l like a person who names Vae我喜欢的人——许嵩 The past,the first such serious like a will probably forever remain a stranger.这辈子,第一次这样认真的喜欢一个也许会永远是陌生人

这篇英语作文有没有语法错误l like a person who names Vae我喜欢的人——许嵩 The past,the first such serious like a will probably forever remain a stranger.这辈子,第一次这样认真的喜欢一个也许会永远是陌生人
这篇英语作文有没有语法错误
l like a person who names Vae
我喜欢的人——许嵩
The past,the first such serious like a will probably forever remain a stranger.
这辈子,第一次这样认真的喜欢一个也许会永远是陌生人的人.
perhaps,you will of the feelings of contempt,an infidel.也许,你们会对我的这种感情嗤之以鼻,不屑一顾.
But,i really like Vae.
但是,我真的喜欢许嵩.
Because his song is so fond of him,and because he,more like his songs.ithink it will continue,i believe!
因为他的歌而喜欢上他,又因为他,更加喜欢他的歌,我想这会持续很久,我相信!
No commercial positioning and packing,the team has announced plans and vae independence.they do is so simple
没有商品化的定位和包装,没有企宣团队的策划和炒作,Vae独立的做自己,就是这样简单.
Vae has said,a song.even a memory one day there was no man to hear of my song,i have one last fans,vae.
Vae曾说,一首歌一个回忆.即便某日没有人再听我写的歌,我还有最后一个歌迷,叫Vae.
But,i'd like to say,i would like him very long time,and perhaps future one day,i'll forget him,but at least,i don't want to give up.don't want to leave.vae - the only love you!
只是,我想说,我会喜欢他很久很久,也许将来的某一天,我会忘掉他,但是至少,我现在不想放弃,不想离开.

这篇英语作文有没有语法错误l like a person who names Vae我喜欢的人——许嵩 The past,the first such serious like a will probably forever remain a stranger.这辈子,第一次这样认真的喜欢一个也许会永远是陌生人
很抱歉,英语和汉语出入太大,改不了,只能重写,
l like a person who is named Vae
我喜欢的人——许嵩
The past, the first such serious like a will probably forever remains a stranger.
这辈子,第一次这样认真的喜欢一个也许会永远是陌生人的人.
perhaps, you will be of the feelings of contempt, an infidel.也许,你们会对我的这种感情嗤之以鼻,不屑一顾.
But,i really like Vae.

但是,我真的喜欢许嵩.
Becausehe is so fond of his song,and because he is more like his songs. i think it will continue, i believe!
因为他的歌而喜欢上他,又因为他,更加喜欢他的歌,我想这会持续很久,我相信!
No commercial positioning and packing, the team has announced plans and vae independence. they do is so simple
没有商品化的定位和包装,没有企宣团队的策划和炒作,Vae独立的做自己,就是这样简单.
Vae has said, a song. even a memory one day there was no man to hear of my song, i have one last fans, vae.
Vae曾说,一首歌一个回忆.即便某日没有人再听我写的歌,我还有最后一个歌迷,叫Vae.
But, i'd like to say, i would like him very long time, and perhaps future one day, i'll forget him, but at least, i don't want to give up. don't want to leave. vae - the only love you!

只是,我想说,我会喜欢他很久很久,也许将来的某一天,我会忘掉他,但是至少,我现在不想放弃,不想离开.

第一句应该是named，第二句，可以这样写，This is the first time that I seriously like a man who may be a totally stranger for me.第三句，Perhaps, you will look down upon my feelings.第四句没什么问题。I am fond of him because of his ...

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第一句应该是named，第二句，可以这样写，This is the first time that I seriously like a man who may be a totally stranger for me.第三句，Perhaps, you will look down upon my feelings.第四句没什么问题。I am fond of him because of his song and because of him ，I like his songs more than before. My feelings about him and his songs will last for a very long time.I believe.
第五句，前半句应该没多大问题，后面，No plans or hypes made by campaign team.Vae do himself independently.Things are so simple.第六句，Vae has said,a song is a piece of memory,even though there's no one listening to my songs one day,I still have one last fan,Vae.最后一句，But，I‘d like to say没问题，I would like him for a very long time.Perhaps,one day in future,I will loose the passion for him.后面没什么错误了。

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你这个里面错误太多了

重新组织了一下：
A person l like called Vae
我喜欢的人——许嵩
For the first time in my life I felt deeply for someone who might remain a stranger to me forever.
这辈子，第一次这样认真的喜欢一个也许会永远是陌生人的...

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重新组织了一下：
A person l like called Vae
我喜欢的人——许嵩
For the first time in my life I felt deeply for someone who might remain a stranger to me forever.
这辈子，第一次这样认真的喜欢一个也许会永远是陌生人的人。
Perhaps you would laugh at me and dismiss me with shrouded shoulders.
也许，你们会对我的这种感情嗤之以鼻，不屑一顾。
But I really like him.
但是我真的喜欢他。
I like him for his songs. I like his songs for being his. I think I will continue to like him this way. I believe.
因为他的歌而喜欢上他，又因为他，更加喜欢他的歌，我想这会持续很久，我相信！
No commercial packaging, nor planning and promoting, without a team backing him, Vae is just being himself, simple as that.
没有商品化的定位和包装，没有企宣团队的策划和炒作，Vae独立的做自己，就是这样简单。
He once said, there is a memory in every song. Maybe one day, there will be nobody listening to my song. I still have one fan, called Vae.
Vae 曾说，一首歌一个回忆。即便某日没有人再听我写的歌，我还有最后一个歌迷，叫Vae。
I’d like to say, I will like him for a long time. Maybe one day I will forget him, but at least for now, I don’t want to give him up. I don’t want to go.
只是，我想说，我会喜欢他很久很久，也许将来的某一天，我会忘掉他，但是至少，我现在不想放弃，不想离开。
Vae, my only love!
许嵩，我唯一的爱。

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