请帮我修改英语剧本!Smart and FoolA profiteer has a big Store.Its name is Good Commodity.It is very magnificent,and beautiful.How tall is the big Store?It is three floors.Today,a fool boy and bright boy go to the store at 8’o clock.Fool boy

请帮我修改英语剧本!Smart and FoolA profiteer has a big Store.Its name is Good Commodity.It is very magnificent,and beautiful.How tall is the big Store?It is three floors.Today,a fool boy and bright boy go to the store at 8’o clock.Fool boy
请帮我修改英语剧本!
Smart and Fool
A profiteer has a big Store.Its name is Good Commodity.It is very magnificent,and beautiful.How tall is the big Store?It is three floors.Today,a fool boy and bright boy go to the store at 8’o clock.
Fool boy:Oh,the Sweater is beautiful!How much is this?
Ask to the salesclerk.The salesclerk is very smart; he think the man look like is fool,so he says:
Salesclerk:Oh,they are thirty dollars.
Fool boy:Wow,they are cheap,they are three dollars?
Salesclerk:Yes,they are thirty dollars?
The Salesclerk is very happy,and he is laugh.
But,the bright boy comes to here,he says
Bright boy:Who is he?
Salesclerk answer:He is our manager.
Bright boy:Manager comes here!
Manager:Ok!And what can I do for you?
Bright boy:I want buy some milk.How much are they?
Manager:Three dollars,OK?
Bright boy:Three dollars?
Manager:Yes,this sweater is on sale.It’s cheap.
Bright boy:I will take them!
Fool boy:Why he buys is three dollars?
Salesclerk:Because he is smart!

请帮我修改英语剧本!Smart and FoolA profiteer has a big Store.Its name is Good Commodity.It is very magnificent,and beautiful.How tall is the big Store?It is three floors.Today,a fool boy and bright boy go to the store at 8’o clock.Fool boy
i don't get what you are talking about, where did da manager come from?
so i jst changed your grammar mistakes
there:
Smart and Fool
A profiteer has a big Store. Its name is Good Commodity. It is very magnificent, and beautiful. How tall is the big Store? It is three floors. Today, a fool boy and bright boy go to the store at 8’o clock.
Fool boy: Oh, the Sweater is beautiful! How much is this?
Ask to the salesclerk. The salesclerk is very smart; he think the man look like is fool, so he says:
Salesclerk: Oh, they are thirty dollars.
Fool boy: Wow, they are cheap, they are three dollars?
Salesclerk: Yes, they are thirty dollars?
The Salesclerk is very happy, and he is laugh.
But, the bright boy comes to here, he says
Bright boy: Who is he?
Salesclerk answer: He is our manager.
Bright boy: Manager comes here!
Manager: Ok! And what can I do for you?
Bright boy: I want buy some milk. How much are they?
Manager: Three dollars, OK?
Bright boy: Three dollars?
Manager: Yes, this sweater is on sale. It’s cheap.
Bright boy: I will take them!
Fool boy: Why he buys is three dollars?
Salesclerk: Because he is smart!