（求英语高手）这份英文求职信有什么问题?这是我刚写的英文求职信 感觉应该有错误的地方……水平不佳,Respect leadership:You are good!First please allow me to extend the sincere regards and the good wish to you!

（求英语高手）这份英文求职信有什么问题?这是我刚写的英文求职信 感觉应该有错误的地方……水平不佳,Respect leadership:You are good!First please allow me to extend the sincere regards and the good wish to you!
（求英语高手）这份英文求职信有什么问题?
这是我刚写的英文求职信 感觉应该有错误的地方……水平不佳,
Respect leadership:
You are good!First please allow me to extend the sincere regards and the good wish to you!Inspite of being very busy heartfelt ,thanks you into glance through my material,and wishes the expensive unit enterprise to be prosperous,progresses day by day!
I am international economics and trade 2011 sessions of graduates,learned in the near future your firm is advertising for the talented person.I hoped can arrive has the opportunity to your firm work.
In school period.I study the specialized knowledge diligently,and invested the huge enthusiasm and the energy for it.The university four years let my English proficiency have progress,And smooth passed the national English six levels of tests.Had certainly certainly has listened to,to say,to read,writes ability.Has the reading specialized literature English foundation of basic skills.I also have the good computer knowledge and application ability,can grasp the basic application software skilled to use.
thank you for your busy schedule to give me concern,such as giving you the opportunity to allow me to interview with you,i would be very grateful.i believe your trust and my ability to bring together for the future opportunities and success.the cause of your company is willing to thriving achievements cause i wish you every success in the future!eagerly look forward to your good news,thank you!
Yours sincerely:
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（求英语高手）这份英文求职信有什么问题?这是我刚写的英文求职信 感觉应该有错误的地方……水平不佳,Respect leadership:You are good!First please allow me to extend the sincere regards and the good wish to you!
“Respect leadership:”没有这个说法吧,求职也不是称领导的.
“ You are good!”简直看到这句就不要你!
第一段先感谢他读你的信,然后写你从哪里得到职位邀请或者要请人的信息.
第二段介绍你的信息.主要学历和经验,没有的就是学校做过什么比较出众的.
第三段就肯定一下自己能胜任这份工.
重要的是,英文简历无需太多中国式的客套话.这封就扔了吧,自己写都好过它把～

机器翻译的痕迹很明显，建议用朴实的英语，好好说明白自己的情况就好。

这是翻译机中翻英的求职信吧？大部分文章的句子不通，语法错误很多。这种信还真是没法改，因为翻译机翻译的东西实在太恐怖了！