请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下英文作文中的错误Useem (2010) argues that if company want to reach this goal,a strong team spirit is very significant.To demonstrate how to focus on mission,an executive team from one of America's biggest

请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下英文作文中的错误Useem (2010) argues that if company want to reach this goal,a strong team spirit is very significant.To demonstrate how to focus on mission,an executive team from one of America's biggest
请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下英文作文中的错误
Useem (2010) argues that if company want to reach this goal,a strong team spirit is very significant.To demonstrate how to focus on mission,an executive team from one of America's biggest financial institution undertake a Leadership Reaction course.Useem relates these lessons about how to make a group of bank manager successfully completed by professional military training.The courses include a series of military obstacles,such as crossing a gap when the necessary materials may not stick.Meanwhile the leaders of a group have to care about the traps,such as the 'red paint' which could make you lose your members.

请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下英文作文中的错误Useem (2010) argues that if company want to reach this goal,a strong team spirit is very significant.To demonstrate how to focus on mission,an executive team from one of America's biggest
Useem (2010) argues(d) that if company want(ed) to reach this goal,a strong team spirit will(would) be very significant.To demonstrate how to focus on completing mission,an executive team from one of the America's biggest financial institutions undertake(undertook) a Leadership Reaction course.Useem relates(这里你想表达甚麼?) these lessons about how to let a group of bank managers successfully being united(原文completed是指甚麼?) by professional military training.The course includes a series of military obstacles,such as crossing a gap when the necessary materials may not be stuck together.Meanwhile,the leaders of a group have to deal with the traps.For instance,the 'red paint',which can lead them to lose their members.
基本上没有甚麼大问题,就是某些地方不是很明白你想表达甚麼,还有如果你这是描述2010的事件,全部都要变成过去式⋯⋯