请大家帮我看看这个英语短文有没有什么错误.Every year on dec.25,the birth of Jesus Christ was memorial day of the Muslim,called the Christmas.From December 24th in next January 6 for Christmas feast.During the festival,christians we

请大家帮我看看这个英语短文有没有什么错误.Every year on dec.25,the birth of Jesus Christ was memorial day of the Muslim,called the Christmas.From December 24th in next January 6 for Christmas feast.During the festival,christians we
请大家帮我看看这个英语短文有没有什么错误.
Every year on dec.25,the birth of Jesus Christ was memorial day of the Muslim,called the Christmas.
From December 24th in next January 6 for Christmas feast.During the festival,christians were held the ceremony.Christmas is originally Christian festivals,because people attention,it became a national holiday,given the biggest festival in a year,and the New Year in western China,the likelihood is the Spring Festival.
Westerners in red,green and white for Christmas,three colors Christmas comes every family to use color to decorate the Christmas.Red with Christmas flower and Christmas candle.Green is the Christmas tree.It was Christmas decorations,the main use of deforestation,a kind of an evergreen tree cypress returned and decoration.The lantern hanging above the colorful paper flowers,gifts and also lit candles,Christmas.
The red and white sceneries is Santa Claus,Christmas is the most popular activities.Western children on Christmas Eve before going to sleep in the fireplace,pillow or a sock next,in their sleep for Santa Claus to fill it after gifts.In the west,Santa is also a custom.
"Christmas" the name is "the word of Christ.Mass" A mass is a form of worship.Christmas is a religious festival.We take it as the birthday of Jesus,and to celebrate Christmas.This day,all over the world in Christian churches all special worship.But there are many Christmas festivities and religious and has no relevance.Exchanging gifts and sending Christmas CARDS,the Christmas day celebrate Christmas.
Jesus' birth is a story,he is by the holy spirit,born of the virgin Mary.God sent messengers add more to Joseph in a dream job,that he don't because Mary and her unmarried pregnancy with her,instead,the boy named "Jesus",meaning is to he rescued the people from sin.
When Mary was parturition,Roman government under the command,all people to Bethlehem must declare household.When Joseph and Mary had to obey.
When they reached Bethlehem,it was already,but they failed to find out that only a hotel accommodation crossing horses may transients.At this moment,Jesus to be born!Then Mary only in a manger,gave birth to Jesus.Later generations to commemorate the birth of Jesus,he decided to Christmas on December 25 every year,mass,to remember Jesus was born.
Christmas is on December 25th commemorate the birth of Jesus,but real birth,no one knows.In the nineteenth century,the popular Christmas cards,Santa Claus,Christmas also began to appear.
the birth of Jesus Christ was memorial day of the Muslim,
Muslim是穆斯林的意思吧..

请大家帮我看看这个英语短文有没有什么错误.Every year on dec.25,the birth of Jesus Christ was memorial day of the Muslim,called the Christmas.From December 24th in next January 6 for Christmas feast.During the festival,christians we
错误确实很多
随便列举一下 既然知道 Muslim 的意思 那么不要忘了他们信仰的是什么 他们会庆祝 Jesus的birth么?
其他的语法错误 数不胜数 不一一指出了 直接上改正之后的文章 这是上半部分
Every year on dec.25,the birth of Jesus Christ was a memorial day of the christians ,which was called the Christmas.
From December 24th to next January 6th is Christmas feast.During the festival,christians held the ceremony.Christmas was originally Christian festivals,then due to people's increasing attention,it became a national holiday and the biggest festival of New Year in western countries,which meant it could be seen as important as the Spring Festival in China.
Christmas can be defined as red,green and white by Westerners,those three pieces of colour come from every family decoration for the Christmas.Red is for Christmas flower and Christmas candle.Green is for the Christmas tree,which is a kind of an evergreen tree like cypress .The Christmas tree is decorated by lantern hung above ,as well as gifts and candles.
Christmas is also the most popular activity.Western children on Christmas Eve often hang up socks in the fireplace or hide their pillows before going to sleep,and it is said that in their sleep the Santa Claus will fill them with gifts.So in the west,Santa is also a custom.
"Christmas" came from the name "the word of Christ's Mass" ,a form of worship among christians.Christmas was a religious festival.We memorize it not only as the birthday of Jesus,but also as the Christmas celebration .In nowadays ,Christian churches all over the world specially worship the Jesus.But many Christmas festivities have no relevance with religious.Like exchanging gifts and sending Christmas cards,the Christmas day is just for celebration.

不好意思，错误很多啊！

Muslim是穆斯林没错
这个短文……除了一些短句，其他都是语法错误。内容出来了，但是句子都不正确。
比如：
From December 24th in next January 6 for Christmas feast. 没有主语没有谓语，不是句子
During the festival, christians were held the ceremony. c...

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Muslim是穆斯林没错
这个短文……除了一些短句，其他都是语法错误。内容出来了，但是句子都不正确。
比如：
From December 24th in next January 6 for Christmas feast. 没有主语没有谓语，不是句子
During the festival, christians were held the ceremony. christians是基督徒的意思，却用了被动语态，基督徒被举行庆典。
Christmas is originally Christian festivals, because people attention, it became a national holiday, given the biggest festival in a year, and the New Year in western China, the likelihood is the Spring Festival. 这个句子有很多个主谓，却没有关系连词，病句。而且ikelihood 是可能性的意思，你要表达是圣诞节和春节其实是相似的，不是用这个词。
等等……

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