初一小短文,帮我改错.如下:Hello!everyone I'm on duty today .It's Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .Last summer We went to Guangzhou We visited the Yue Xiu park .We went shoping at the big supermarket But too tired and we didn't go to play We h
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初一小短文,帮我改错.如下:Hello!everyone I'm on duty today .It's Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .Last summer We went to Guangzhou We visited the Yue Xiu park .We went shoping at the big supermarket But too tired and we didn't go to play We h
初一小短文,帮我改错.
如下:
Hello!everyone I'm on duty today .
It's Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .
Last summer
We went to Guangzhou
We visited the Yue Xiu park .
We went shoping at the big supermarket
But too tired and we didn't go to play
We had a good time .
And hope you can go to GangZhou one day .
That's all.
thanks for listening to me .
初一小短文,帮我改错.如下:Hello!everyone I'm on duty today .It's Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .Last summer We went to Guangzhou We visited the Yue Xiu park .We went shoping at the big supermarket But too tired and we didn't go to play We h
Hello!everyone !I'm on duty today .
Today is Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .
Last summer
We had went to Guangzhou
We visited the Yue Xiu park and went shoping at the big supermarket
But I felt too tired to go to play
We had a good time .
So hope you will go to GangZhou some day .
That's all.
thanks for listening to me .
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Hello!everyone !I 今天我值日。
第十三次是星期三 Aprill。
去年夏天
我们去广州
我们参观了越秀公园。
我们走在大超市购物
但太累了,我们没去玩
我们有很好的时间。
并希望有一天你能去赣州市。
这是所有。
谢谢你给我听。哪里不对哟.....
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你都写乱套了
Hello!everyone !I 今天我值日。
第十三次是星期三 Aprill。
去年夏天
我们去广州
我们参观了越秀公园。
我们走在大超市购物
但太累了,我们没去玩
我们有很好的时间。
并希望有一天你能去赣州市。
这是所有。
谢谢你给我听。
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today is Wednesday thirteenth of April
we xisited yue xiu park and we went to shopping at a big supermarket,but we were tired and we didn't have relax time.
tahnks for your listen
We visited Yuexiu Park.
shopping
We were too tired to play.
I hope you can go there someday.