请高手来给英语作文改错I felt happy after I look this book because I get some truth.The fablesshow me how to be a good man.It told me what should I do.We will meetthe bad things in our life.So what should we do?But Aesop told thetruth to us
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请高手来给英语作文改错I felt happy after I look this book because I get some truth.The fablesshow me how to be a good man.It told me what should I do.We will meetthe bad things in our life.So what should we do?But Aesop told thetruth to us
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I felt happy after I look this book because I get some truth.The fablesshow me how to be a good man.It told me what should I do.We will meetthe bad things in our life.So what should we do?But Aesop told thetruth to us.
最好直接把作文改完以后再吵一次,
请高手来给英语作文改错I felt happy after I look this book because I get some truth.The fablesshow me how to be a good man.It told me what should I do.We will meetthe bad things in our life.So what should we do?But Aesop told thetruth to us
有错,特别是你那个过去式,还有宾语从句里面的语序也有问题.应该用陈述句的顺序,知道不?
I felt HAPPIER after I READ this book because I GET TO KNOW some truth. The fables SHOWED me how to be a NICE(这个词还是没有多好 看看你可不可以想出别的) PERSON.It told me what I SHOULD do. WHAT SHOULD WE DO WHEN BAD THIN...
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I felt HAPPIER after I READ this book because I GET TO KNOW some truth. The fables SHOWED me how to be a NICE(这个词还是没有多好 看看你可不可以想出别的) PERSON.It told me what I SHOULD do. WHAT SHOULD WE DO WHEN BAD THINGS HAPPEN TO US?
最后一段的意思我不太懂
如果是说:故事里没有告诉我们遇到坏事时要怎么做 但是aesop告诉了我们真相 的话
就是前面再接:The fable didn't tell, but what I know is that Aesop told us the truth.
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读书 read this book不用look
The fables show me改为过去式showed
It told me what should I do改为what I should do
meet the bad things中去掉the
But Aesop told the truth to us.中将But去掉或改为And
I felt exhilarated after reading this book because I get to know some truth. The fables showed me how to be a responsible man. Furthermore, it told me what I should do, especially when we meet certain...
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I felt exhilarated after reading this book because I get to know some truth. The fables showed me how to be a responsible man. Furthermore, it told me what I should do, especially when we meet certain obstacles in life. However, Aesop told us the truth.(总觉得还没写完)
=有的形容词你也可以自己换成你想要的,如把responsibe 换成kind-hearted, generous, gentle等
=有些地方重复,我换了一下,意思是一样的。
=加了一些连词,让文章更通顺流畅
希望能帮上~
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