以My besi way of going to school为题的英语作文60词以上
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以My besi way of going to school为题的英语作文60词以上
以My besi way of going to school为题的英语作文
60词以上
以My besi way of going to school为题的英语作文60词以上
My Best Way of Going to School
Comparing with other ways of going school,I enjoy riding a bike best.
First of all,I can make more exersise during my way to school.Then,the
fresh air make me be comfortable all day.The most inportant is I can go with my classmates,we talk and laugh.
What a exciting way of going school!I enjoy it!
希望能帮上你.
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60词的话语法要求应该比较宽
楼上的可以
不过有几个小地方
"during my way to school"during应改为on
during后应加一件事来表示一段时间 on my way在路上就可以了
"the fresh air make me be comfortable all day" make加单三为makes;
去掉be;all...
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60词的话语法要求应该比较宽
楼上的可以
不过有几个小地方
"during my way to school"during应改为on
during后应加一件事来表示一段时间 on my way在路上就可以了
"the fresh air make me be comfortable all day" make加单三为makes;
去掉be;all改为the whole
all 强调全部,whole则侧重单个的整体
"The most inportant is I can go with my classmates,we talk and laugh.
"important拼写错误;is后应加that,成为表语从句,否则语法混乱;后面改成and we can talk and laugh,两句话放一起必须有连词。
这句话改成"What's more,I can go with my classmates to enjoy talking and laughing."或许会更恰当。
这个阶段的作文不要求也不提倡用复杂的句式,重点是句子通顺流畅,拼写正确,适当运用课本中的固定短语和常用句式。书写工整漂亮会为你赢得老师的青睐。
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