关于修改英语演讲稿Hello,everyone!I am very pleased to stand here.I want to talk about the problems of environment.Now,the pollution becomes very serious.Such as noise pollution,air pollution and so on.The living is much better than before,sc

关于修改英语演讲稿Hello,everyone!I am very pleased to stand here.I want to talk about the problems of environment.Now,the pollution becomes very serious.Such as noise pollution,air pollution and so on.The living is much better than before,sc
关于修改英语演讲稿
Hello,everyone!I am very pleased to stand here.I want to talk about the problems of environment.Now,the pollution becomes very serious.Such as noise pollution,air pollution and so on.The living is much better than before,science and technology are improving little by little,but the environment is polluted.Therefore,in order to protect our home ,we need to protect the environment from time to time.When you see a lawn,what will you want to do?TO step on it or to protect it?As the Middle School students,we must to protect it.,is that wrong?
It is also important to protect trees.All the people live under the same clouds and the sky,they have the same living place.However,the Earth doesn’t only belong to them.Many things are also the masters .Such as trees.Why should we protect trees?Because they make the sky isn’t covered by smoke,they can keep air fresh and so on.If we don’t protect trees,the World will lose the green and protection.So,let us protect trees or plant trees.All of us don’t want to see the last tree will be cut down.
There are many ways to protect the environment.we all hope the birds can sing every morning,the fish can swim in the sea,and the branches can dance in the wind.So,let’s protect the environment together,ok?That’s all,thanks for listening to my speak!
上面这篇演讲稿,是否有语法或时态或单词弄错的地方,

关于修改英语演讲稿Hello,everyone!I am very pleased to stand here.I want to talk about the problems of environment.Now,the pollution becomes very serious.Such as noise pollution,air pollution and so on.The living is much better than before,sc
额,这个这个,中式英语痕迹重了点,就只在语法时态单词上修改了.
Hello,everyone!I am very pleased to stand here.I want to talk about the problems of environment.Now,the pollution becomes very serious,such as noise pollution,air pollution and so on.People's life is much better than before,and science and technology are being improved little by little,but the environment is troubled by pollution.
Therefore,in order to protect our home ,we need to protect the environment from time to time.When you see a lawn,what will you want to do?TO step on it or to protect it?As Middle School students,we should protect it,shouldn't we ("is that wrong?"实在太中式了,建议不用；不喜欢我的该法可以自己再想个.)
It is also important to protect trees.Living under the same clouds and the sky,people share the same living place.However,the Earth doesn’t belong to them only.Other creatures,for example,trees,can also be masters .
Why should we protect trees?Let me tell you.
They protect the sky from smoke and dust.
They keep air fresh.
And they help the world remain green.
Imaging this,If we don’t protect them and let them gone,what kind of world is to be left
Briefly,protection is far from satisfying.One more suggestion,plant some!Believe me ,none of you here would like to see the last tree cut dowm.（这里本人发挥的有点多……）
There are many ways to protect the environment.We all hope that birds sing every morning and every corner,fish swim in the water freely （不会只有sea吧,淡水鱼哪去了?）,and tree branches dance in the wind cheerfully.
so let’s protect the environment together,ok?（这句别扭啊,建议修改.）That’s all,thanks for listening to my speech!