I often learn English by keeping an English note book .It makes me memorize a lot of grammar and new wprds .Some times,I learn English by watching English-language movies.But it is a bed way for me .Because I think actors speak too quickly to underst

I often learn English by keeping an English note book .It makes me memorize a lot of grammar and new wprds .Some times,I learn English by watching English-language movies.But it is a bed way for me .Because I think actors speak too quickly to underst
I often learn English by keeping an English note book .It makes me memorize a lot of grammar and new wprds .Some times,I learn English by watching English-language movies.But it is a bed way for me .Because I think actors speak too quickly to understand.I always singing English songs .It is a good way to learn a language.Because the more I singing English songs ,the better I improve my spoken English .It is relax to study the way.In short,I like study English .I think it's the best way to learn English for me.

I often learn English by keeping an English note book .It makes me memorize a lot of grammar and new wprds .Some times,I learn English by watching English-language movies.But it is a bed way for me .Because I think actors speak too quickly to underst
I often learn English by keeping an English note book .It makes me memorized a lot of grammar and new words .Some times,I learn English by watching English-language movies.But it is a bad way for me .Because I think actors speak too quick to understand.I always sing English songs .It is a good way to learn a language.Because the more I singing ,the more improvement of my spoken English i will get.It is relaxing to study in this way.In short,I like studying English .I think singing is the best way to learn English for me.
make sth done
然后有简单的拼写错误,相信你自己写的时候,应该不会出现这样的错误
too +adj+to.之间是形容词,而不是副词
I always singing English songs用了always 就表示是一般现在时,应该是sing 而不是singing ,singing 是现在进行时
Because the more I singing English songs ,the better I improve my spoken English
首先english songs多余,前文多次提到,再写显得累赘
然后the more.the more 的用法你还没用熟练
给你一better 的例句The more English you practise,the better your English is.
.It is relax to study the way
is 和 relax都是动词,一个句子中是不可能出现2个谓语动词的,这时需要把relax改成形容词（现在分词形式）
In short,I like study English .I think it's the best way to learn English for me.
最后it's 指代不明,可以像我帮你改的那样改,或是把2句话换顺序
总的来说还可以啦
希望可以帮到你,有不懂的还可以问我^^

I always learn English by keeping a notebook .The English notebook makes me memorize a lot of grammars and new words .Some times, I learn English through watching English movies.But it seems not a goo...

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I always learn English by keeping a notebook .The English notebook makes me memorize a lot of grammars and new words .Some times, I learn English through watching English movies.But it seems not a good way for the reason that the actors in the films speak too quickly for me to understand.Besides,I always sing English songs .It is a quick method to learn a foreign language because the more English songs I sing ,the better I can improve my spoken English,and by this way I feel relaxed.Generally,I like studying English .I think it's so interesting for me!
你作文里面be动词以及时态有的用的有问题，另外多背点词组，丰富下内容。

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