一篇英语小文章 指出 英语语法错误 it seems ,i have the similar expenrice as the hero of movie ,i guessit's why the movie has been deeply moving me .when i was teenage,i once addict in cpmpute game ,i played it all the days,all the night

一篇英语小文章 指出 英语语法错误 it seems ,i have the similar expenrice as the hero of movie ,i guessit's why the movie has been deeply moving me .when i was teenage,i once addict in cpmpute game ,i played it all the days,all the night
一篇英语小文章
指出 英语语法错误
it seems ,i have the similar expenrice as the hero of movie ,i guess
it's why the movie has been deeply moving me .
when i was teenage,i once addict in cpmpute game ,i played it all the days,all the nights
and all the time.for me,computer jusy like a drug,i can't control myself,or maybe i just
avoided face reality.
no friend ,no study .live a world of me and internet.everything don't make sense.
in this way ,i waste all four years in school
certainly,i was real real bad at study,the score almost near the last one.
but than,in fact i still can't rember which the day ,what the thing made i decide to change
.yes ,i want to change ,i don't want to feel depress anymore,i want to my life and myself
yes,i would never let my dream died,altough some stupid i did before
i was study so hard that even at the weekend i still go tothe school
it not a boast,i spend two year to learn 6 year subject in school ,and i was the best in my
class and little famous in our school

一篇英语小文章 指出 英语语法错误 it seems ,i have the similar expenrice as the hero of movie ,i guessit's why the movie has been deeply moving me .when i was teenage,i once addict in cpmpute game ,i played it all the days,all the night
it seems that,i ..
it's why the movie has moved me deeply .
when i was a teenager..
i once was addicted to cpmpute game ,i played it all the days and nights.这样就可以了.
for me,computer is jusy like a drug,i can't control myself,or maybe i just avoided facing reality.
live a world of me and internet.不如改为 live in a world only me and the internet..
in this way ,i waste all four years in school certainly不如改为
of course ,i wasted all the four years in school.
i was real real bad at study,the score almost near the last one
不如改为：i was really bad at study ,i was always the last ones in my class...
but than,in fact i still can't rember which the day ,what the thing made i decide to change
不如改为
but then ,something happened that made me decide to change ,however,i couldn't remember the exact time..
don't want to feel depress anymore,i want to my life and myself
yes,i would never let my dream died
改为i don't want to depress anyone ,i want to live a new life.
i would make my dream come true.
altough some stupid i did before
i was study so hard that even at the weekend i still go tothe school
it not a boast,i spend two year to learn 6 year subject in school ,and i was the best in my
class and little famous in our school
改为,
although i did some stupid things in the future,i was studing hard that even at the weekends,i would go to school.it was not a boast
i spent two years to learn 6-year subjects in school .
and i was the best one in my class and i am a little famous in my school .