帮忙修改一下英文自我介绍作文如下：Hello everyone.I'm glad to speak here,and thank you for giving me this changce.My name is Linda.I'm 12 years oldI think bule is my lucky color.I like Detective Conan best.I want to go to Japan one da

帮忙修改一下英文自我介绍作文如下：Hello everyone.I'm glad to speak here,and thank you for giving me this changce.My name is Linda.I'm 12 years oldI think bule is my lucky color.I like Detective Conan best.I want to go to Japan one da
帮忙修改一下英文自我介绍
作文如下：
Hello everyone.I'm glad to speak here,and thank you for giving me this changce.
My name is Linda.I'm 12 years old
I think bule is my lucky color.I like Detective Conan best.I want to go to Japan one day .Because the japanese have a lot of good—looking animation.
My motto is "You are never to young to doing things"
_______________________________(加一个过渡句）
For exanple,…………………………………………（许多成功人士的事例）
They are very succes.______________________（我十分佩服他们）
Thank you.
要求：再添加一个过渡句.
另外检查本人作文中有什么不妥（语法、单词等）
提出建议.

帮忙修改一下英文自我介绍作文如下：Hello everyone.I'm glad to speak here,and thank you for giving me this changce.My name is Linda.I'm 12 years oldI think bule is my lucky color.I like Detective Conan best.I want to go to Japan one da
I want to go to Japan one day .后面的那个one day 应该去掉.
Because the japanese have a lot of good—looking animation.
the 去掉,japanese改成japan,Japanese是日本人,日语的意思,你这句话的意思应该是：因为日本有很多好看的动漫吧?动漫是可数名词吗?如果是就要加s了.
.我的水平很烂,只能改到这地步了.sorry

是chance不是changce
I very admire them
sorry ,嘿嘿。其它的我不会了

有几个单词有问题 My motto is "You are never too young to doing things"
__ which also called "Better late than never"and so many people also try to achieve success during their whole life.____________晚做总比不...

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有几个单词有问题 My motto is "You are never too young to doing things"
__ which also called "Better late than never"and so many people also try to achieve success during their whole life.____________晚做总比不做好___________________(加一个过渡句）
For exanple,()…Laozi and Jiang Zi Ya,they seek for their changce for a long time and become successful when they were old enough.………………………………………（许多成功人士的事例）
They are very succes.____I admire their will.我钦佩他们的意志__________________（我十分佩服他们）
Thank you.

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