看看这篇文章有没有错误Paris is the capital of France,is one of the most prosperous city in the world.The reason that Paris is a city of history of civilization,because Paris has over 2,000 years of history,as the capital of France also has

看看这篇文章有没有错误Paris is the capital of France,is one of the most prosperous city in the world.The reason that Paris is a city of history of civilization,because Paris has over 2,000 years of history,as the capital of France also has
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Paris is the capital of France,is one of the most prosperous city in the world.
The reason that Paris is a city of history of civilization,because Paris has over 2,000 years of history,as the capital of France also has eight years.
Paris is a romantic city,many people like to there,there is still a city full of flowers,eyeful flowers are blooming,people forget.
Paris has many fun and beautiful place.
T Paris Eiffel Tower is a fun place.Is a built in 1889,the Eiffel Tower in Paris,France 324 meters high.Tower design novel and unique,so it becomes one important Paris France and scenic spots.
The triumphal arch is a famous scenic spots in Paris.The annual July 14,the whole country to celebrate National Day in France,the French President should be adopted from the Arc de Triomphe.Arc de Triomphe 50 meters,45 meters wide,22 meters long.Arc de Triomphe and imaginative in the city even more of their romance.

看看这篇文章有没有错误Paris is the capital of France,is one of the most prosperous city in the world.The reason that Paris is a city of history of civilization,because Paris has over 2,000 years of history,as the capital of France also has
Paris the captital of France,in one of the most prosperous city in the world.
The reason Paris is a city of history of civliztion is that Paris has over 2000-year history,and it has been the capital of France for eight years.
Paris is a romantic city.Many people like to be there.There is still a city full of flowers.Beautiful flowers are blooming.People forget Paris has many fun and beautiful places.
The Paris Elffel Tower is a fun place which was built in 1889.The Tower is 324 merters height.The design is unique,so it becomes one of the important scenic spots in Paris,France.
The triumphal arch is a famous scenic spots in Paris.In July 14 every year,the whole country will celebrate the National Day in France.The French president will ...from the Arc de Triomphe.The Arc is 50 meters height,45 meters width,and 22 meters length.The Arc in the city even brings more romance.

恕我直言，错误实在是太多了。几乎每一句都有错。
比如第一句，怎么能在一个句子里用逗号隔开就连用两个is呢？
这句话应该改为：
Paris is the capital of France，and it is...
或者如一楼朋友所述：
Paris is the capital of France，which is...
如果确实想获得大家的帮助，可以...

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恕我直言，错误实在是太多了。几乎每一句都有错。
比如第一句，怎么能在一个句子里用逗号隔开就连用两个is呢？
这句话应该改为：
Paris is the capital of France，and it is...
或者如一楼朋友所述：
Paris is the capital of France，which is...
如果确实想获得大家的帮助，可以把句子一个一个提出来。这样多，实在不容易说清楚。

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有错误，第一句第二个is前加which,第二句reason后加is。等等