托福作文的准备you agree or disagree with the following statement?The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past.我的中文思路已经有了.希望帮我用英语稍微拓展一下,不用写成篇,我想要一些比较重量级的

托福作文的准备you agree or disagree with the following statement?The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past.我的中文思路已经有了.希望帮我用英语稍微拓展一下,不用写成篇,我想要一些比较重量级的
托福作文的准备
you agree or disagree with the following statement?The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past.
我的中文思路已经有了.希望帮我用英语稍微拓展一下,不用写成篇,我想要一些比较重量级的话.
中文框架,首先是否定的.原因如下
第一,许多商家为了能够赚的更多的钱,在食品中加添加剂.地沟油,三鹿奶粉.植物上化学药剂
第二,现在的环境越来越差,种出来的植物受环境的影响质量也不高,海里的污染也大,吃鱼不安全.
第三,快餐越来越多,上班繁忙,社会发展快,快餐店越来越多,没有时间准备饭菜,出去吃快餐比较多,而快餐多是不健康的食物.

托福作文的准备you agree or disagree with the following statement?The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past.我的中文思路已经有了.希望帮我用英语稍微拓展一下,不用写成篇,我想要一些比较重量级的
思路很棒诶~
作为练习当然可以开外挂查查添加剂地沟油啥啥的英文表达啦
如果考试的时候有完全不会写的专业名词最好跳过 不写比写错要好
不过考试的时候一点小错问题不大啦~
其实能在规定时间内完成作文是一切东东的前提：）
至于你的思路 我把第一点划到科技头上去了 所以重点讲述三鹿奶粉里的三聚氰胺melamine吧 具体你自己查哈~
以下仅供参考 你写完最好找老外批改一下 避免Chinglish:P
First of all,while the rapid development in food technology has benefited us in numerous ways,some companies started to illegally add advanced but poisonous additives to food so as to gain as much profit as they can.A recent case involving such malicious deed concerns a well-known brand,Sanlu Milk Power...
Second of all,the increasing amount of pollution has negatively impacted on not only the air we breathe and the water we drink,but our food as well.Mountains of garbage and waste are poured into the earth and the sea,directly resulting in the malnutrition and variation of the plant and animals dwelling in the polluted areas...
Third of all,the prevalence of fast food has caused hazardous obesity both among adults and among children...

这么写绝对跪.单词量不足以支撑的情况下你写的东西越复杂问题越多。托福中重量级的永远是结构和调理出彩的单词三四个就够。你有好点的思路吗？还是老方法123. 你的三个points都还好，但我觉得你写不出。第一个点你要准备好例子你拿三鹿的事情来说可以但你知道详细的事或者能描述出来么？第二个点太牵强，环境差是局部你没supporting detail去支持。第三点是最好说的就是快餐越来越多人变的越来越胖。...

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这么写绝对跪.单词量不足以支撑的情况下你写的东西越复杂问题越多。托福中重量级的永远是结构和调理出彩的单词三四个就够。

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