一篇英语小短文,请大家帮忙纠正下语法错误,谢谢^^The Generation-gapGeneration-gap are this word familiar with you? yes I think you are. Because now the word become more and more popular in the entire world. Whether you from west or

一篇英语小短文,请大家帮忙纠正下语法错误,谢谢^^The Generation-gapGeneration-gap are this word familiar with you? yes I think you are. Because now the word become more and more popular in the entire world. Whether you from west or
一篇英语小短文,请大家帮忙纠正下语法错误,谢谢^^
The Generation-gap
Generation-gap are this word familiar with you? yes I think you are. Because now the word become more and more popular in the entire world. Whether you from west or east there must has a problem called
Generation-gap between young and older.
Why would this happen? I think one of the reason is the world rapidly improvement. Something we think it's good but our parent don't. For example one of my friend she is a very fashionable girl one day she
bought a very short skirt for her birthday party. Actually I believe it's pretty good on her, but at the night she didn't wore that skirt to her party, I asked she why,she told me that she's parent had seen
that skirt and they believe the skirt is too short and too hot . They would never agree her to take this. She complained to me that she parent is so traditional. In this point i do agree with her. What a
matter to a girl wanna wear more fashionable in her birthday party? Beside she already 21 years old.
But if we just thinking in our way we will be never peace with our parent. We got to figure out a way to solve the problem, what i did is a talk,a gentle talk and it works. I believe if we tald our parent
what we think and listen what they think we maybe can meet each other in half way. That would be great. For what i have through in the past I decided to not limit my child in the future and be a good friend
good listener and good talker of them. I believe in the future there will not a problem called Generation-gap. At least not in my family.

一篇英语小短文,请大家帮忙纠正下语法错误,谢谢^^The Generation-gapGeneration-gap are this word familiar with you? yes I think you are. Because now the word become more and more popular in the entire world. Whether you from west or
1.Generation-gap are this word familiar with you?are---is；with--to
2.called Generation-gap between young and older.older--old
3.I think one of the reason is the world rapidly improvement reason--reasons
4.she didn't wore that skirt to her party wore--wear
5.and they believe the skirt is too short and too hot believe--believed
6.She complained to me that she parent is so traditional.to--with;she--her
7.Beside she already 21 years old.she后边加is
错误颇多,本人才疏学浅,定然有错误的地方,所以仅供参考.

The Generation-gap
代沟的
Generation-gap are this word familiar with you? yes I think you are. Because now the word become more and more popular in the entire world. Whether you from west or east...

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The Generation-gap
代沟的
Generation-gap are this word familiar with you? yes I think you are. Because now the word become more and more popular in the entire world. Whether you from west or east there must has a problem called
代沟是这个词熟悉你？是的，我想你。因为现在这个词变得越来越受欢迎，在整个世界。你是否从西或东一定有问题
Generation-gap between young and older.
年轻人和老年人之间的代沟。
Why would this happen? I think one of the reason is the world rapidly improvement. Something we think it's good but our parent don't. For example one of my friend she is a very fashionable girl one day she
为什么会发生这种事？我认为原因之一是世界的迅速发展。我们认为它是好，但我们的父母不知道。比如我的一个朋友，她是一个很时尚的女孩，她有一天
bought a very short skirt for her birthday party. Actually I believe it's pretty good on her, but at the night she didn't wore that skirt to her party, I asked she why,she told me that she's parent had seen
买了一条很短的裙子为她的生日晚会。其实我认为这是不错的她，但在晚上，她不穿裙子参加她的聚会，我问她为什么，她告诉我，她父母看
that skirt and they believe the skirt is too short and too hot . They would never agree her to take this. She complained to me that she parent is so traditional. In this point i do agree with her. What a
他们相信，裙子，裙子太短了，太热了。他们不会同意她将这。她向我抱怨她父母是如此的传统。在这一点上我同意她。干嘛
matter to a girl wanna wear more fashionable in her birthday party? Beside she already 21 years old.
物质女孩想穿更时尚在她的生日派对？在她已经21岁了。
But if we just thinking in our way we will be never peace with our parent. We got to figure out a way to solve the problem, what i did is a talk,a gentle talk and it works. I believe if we tald our parent
但是如果我们想在我们的方式，我们将永远和我们的父母。我们得想出一个办法来解决这个问题，我所做的是谈话，温柔的说话，它的作品。我相信如果我们讲话我们的父母
what we think and listen what they think we maybe can meet each other in half way. That would be great. For what i have through in the past I decided to not limit my child in the future and be a good friend
我们认为，他们认为我们也许可以满足对方在一半的方法。这个主意真是太好了！因为我过去我决定不限制我的孩子在未来，是一个很好的朋友
good listener and good talker of them. I believe in the future there will not a problem called Generation-gap. At least not in my family.
好的倾听者和健谈的人。我相信未来会有所谓的代沟不是问题。至少在我的家庭。

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