英语好点的同学帮我看看这段话有没有语法错误~Nowadays, people seem to hardly leaveelectronic products, especially in mobile phone.At the table, people from time to time to look at the cell phone. Everyoneignores each other. They mi

英语好点的同学帮我看看这段话有没有语法错误~Nowadays, people seem to hardly leaveelectronic products, especially in mobile phone.At the table, people from time to time to look at the cell phone. Everyoneignores each other. They mi
英语好点的同学帮我看看这段话有没有语法错误~
Nowadays, people seem to hardly leaveelectronic products, especially in mobile phone.At the table, people from time to time to look at the cell phone. Everyoneignores each other. They missed the opportunity to talk and care about eachother. They forget the important of verbal communications. It can't be deniedthat electronic products are convenient but sometimes they are aloof.
Unforgettable wedding is every girl's dream.There are some differences between the Chinese wedding and the Western wedding.But they have the common point. The point is the couple absolutely don't wantto see a sea of down-turned faces staring at their LCD screens in theirwedding. In my mind, the wedding don't need many people but attendees must bemy close relations and friends. Every guest doesn't need to send any present,only need to send sincere blessings, that's enough. The wedding also don't needbigger and more luxury. Touching and sweet wedding is the best. I once watcheda wedding video. It really moved me .Maybe you will ask what moved me. I willtell you nothing just the couple's happiness and the guest's sincere blessing.At the beginning of thewedding, the guest sang a song for the couple. Then the couple swore an oath. Everyone's staredat the couple not the cell phone. You could see many people were moved totears.
Unplugged weddings are agood idea. Maybe in this way, the wedding can be not disturbed. Hey guys youcan try the unplugged weddings in the future. It's really new and meaningful.

英语好点的同学帮我看看这段话有没有语法错误~Nowadays, people seem to hardly leaveelectronic products, especially in mobile phone.At the table, people from time to time to look at the cell phone. Everyoneignores each other. They mi
第一句的leaveelectronic拼写错误,你可能少打了个空格
第三句的Everyoneignores each other.语法错误,可能是打英文时的疏忽,我建议你看一下
还有They missed the opportunity to talk and care about eachother.“eachother.”也是少打空格了吧.
还有一些你没打空格的句子我认为是疏忽啦.
Unforgettable wedding is every girl's dream.难忘的婚礼是每个女孩的梦想.这句缺少冠词,形容词作定语修饰名词一般加冠词.
In my mind,the wedding don't need many people but attendees must bemy close relations and friends.“must bemy”错误的原因是：情态动词后面常跟动词原型.你的bemy 也拼写错误,正确是：be my
I once watcheda wedding video.的“watcheda ”好像打错了
嗯,the unplugged weddings中的“unplugged”你的意思是指没有使用电子乐器的婚礼吗?我不大见过这种学术用词所以不知道你对了吗.
也许我不小心漏了你的错误,也希望你再认真看看,希望满意我的回答,