帮我修改超简单的小学英语口语稿Good morning,everyone!My name is__________,I’m nine years old.I study in MABU school.I’m a happy girl,I have many hobbies.Such as:reading,painting,singing.I like to eat meat.But I don’t like fish at

帮我修改超简单的小学英语口语稿Good morning,everyone!My name is__________,I’m nine years old.I study in MABU school.I’m a happy girl,I have many hobbies.Such as:reading,painting,singing.I like to eat meat.But I don’t like fish at
帮我修改超简单的小学英语口语稿
Good morning,everyone!My name is__________,I’m nine years old.I study in MABU school.
I’m a happy girl,I have many hobbies.Such as:reading,painting,singing.I like to eat meat.But I don’t like fish at all.I like green.And I have many friends.
I’m a good schoolgirl in teachers’ eyes!My school is so nice.I have many teachers.And I like my teachers.Of course,I like English best.I have a happy family.My mother always says to me:oh,you’re a cute girl!
There are______people in my family.My dad is a worker.My mother is a worker too.And I have a a little brother.his name's ______.he always play with me.And I also love him.He is very funny ,one day,he always drink water,I ask he:“why do you drink so much water?” He said :“I have just had an apple!”I still can’t understand he ,then he tell me:“I forgot to wash the apple!”
This is my family.Do you like us?
That's all.Thank you!
我英语太差,主要是后面半截啊,逻辑啊,语法啊,不要改难了,小孩能力有限,能生动而简单是最好了的!
各位辛苦了,你们的意见都很好.知道有点过分,但能够改好了让我复制就行吗?

帮我修改超简单的小学英语口语稿Good morning,everyone!My name is__________,I’m nine years old.I study in MABU school.I’m a happy girl,I have many hobbies.Such as:reading,painting,singing.I like to eat meat.But I don’t like fish at
Good morning,everyone!My name is__________,I’m nine years old.I am studying in MABU school.
I’m a happy girl,I have many hobbies.Reading,painting,and singing.I like to eat meat.But I don’t like to eat fish at all.I like green vegetables.And I have many friends.
I’m a good schoolgirl in teachers’ eyes!My school is so nice.I have many teachers.And I like my teachers.Of course,I like English very much.I have a happy family.My mother always says to me:oh,you’re a cute girl!
There are 4 people in my family.My father is a worker.My mother is a worker too.And I have a little brother.his name's ______.he always plays with me.And I love him very much.He is very funny ,one day,he was drinking water,I asked he:“why do you drink so much water?” He said :“I have just had an apple!”I still couldn’t understand he ,then he told me:“I forgot to wash the apple!”
This is my family.Do you like it?
That's all.Thank you!