哪个英语厉害的,这是我自己编的剧本,帮我修改一下,有没有什么语法错误?A：hi.I‘m arriving your city.I'll meet you.where are you?B:I'llsee you on T.(忙音） A:Hey!what's the matter!I think she is on T Road.//

哪个英语厉害的,这是我自己编的剧本,帮我修改一下,有没有什么语法错误?A：hi.I‘m arriving your city.I'll meet you.where are you?B:I'llsee you on T.(忙音） A:Hey!what's the matter!I think she is on T Road.//
哪个英语厉害的,这是我自己编的剧本,帮我修改一下,有没有什么语法错误?
A：hi.I‘m arriving your city.I'll meet you.where are you?B:I'llsee you on T.(忙音） A:Hey!what's the matter!I think she is on T Road.// A:Hi,body.I want to go to T Road.Do you know there?C:Where's T Road?I don't know.Only has Teeny Road and Teather Road.A:I think I want to go to Teather Road.C:Turn right,when you see a bank turn left ,when you see a Teather Road,you are arriving.

哪个英语厉害的,这是我自己编的剧本,帮我修改一下,有没有什么语法错误?A：hi.I‘m arriving your city.I'll meet you.where are you?B:I'llsee you on T.(忙音） A:Hey!what's the matter!I think she is on T Road.//
有些问题:I'm arriving虽然看上去是进行式,但事实上表达的是我将会arrive的意思.I'll meet you多余.还有路有很多种,有street,road,avenue,boulevard.,A怎么能够光听到一个字母就可以断定是那种路呢?再说一条路并不短,一般要告诉对方位置的话,会讲路的号码或者哪两条路的交接之处吧.
我根据你想表达的场景重新改了一下：
A:Hi,I've just arrived.Where are you right now?
B:I'm at the intersection of Yew Street (这个我随便编的) and T.(phone's hung up)
A:Hey,what's going on?.Hi there,do you know any names of the streets or roads in this city that start with
C:Well,there are Teeny Road and Teather Road.
A:Teather Road,that's the one!Excuse me,do you know how I can get to the intersection of Yew St and Teather Rd?
C:You should turn right at this corner right here.Walk straight along until you see a bank.Then turn left and continue walking until you reach your destination.
当然,你完全可以把intersection那些给删掉,我只是觉得这么说makes more sense.

1.I‘m arriving at your city
2.I'll meet you改成 I want to see you now .
3.body 改成 boy
4.Do you know there?改成Do you know it/the place?
5.Only has Teeny Road and Teather Road改成There is...

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1.I‘m arriving at your city
2.I'll meet you改成 I want to see you now .
3.body 改成 boy
4.Do you know there?改成Do you know it/the place?
5.Only has Teeny Road and Teather Road改成There is only Teeny Road and Teather Road.
6.Turn right,when you see a bank turn left ,when you see a Teather Road,you are arriving.改成Turn right,and turn left when you see a bank .Then you will see a Teather Road,and you can't miss it

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