求高手帮忙看看英文的自我介绍?.请帮忙修改错误地方!面试要用的.所以请保证正确率.看看哪里有语法或用词错误!Good afternoon,my mane is XX.Today I participate this interview .First i want to say thank you for g

求高手帮忙看看英文的自我介绍?.请帮忙修改错误地方!面试要用的.所以请保证正确率.看看哪里有语法或用词错误!Good afternoon,my mane is XX.Today I participate this interview .First i want to say thank you for g
求高手帮忙看看英文的自我介绍?.请帮忙修改错误地方!
面试要用的.所以请保证正确率.
看看哪里有语法或用词错误!
Good afternoon,my mane is XX.Today I participate this interview .First i want to say thank you for giving me the chance.It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for the interview,i would like to answer whatever you may raise,and i hope i can make a good performance today.Now i will introduce myself briefly.I am a 19-year-old gril who would graduate from shanghai nanhu vocational school in 2009,my specialty is Aviation service.I spent about 3 years to learn sth that i would need in the work in the future.Such as electrionic ticket,security check,and anything else and so on.In the school my nearly all school record was fine.Besides,i have got many diploma before.They are all writed in my resume.All of these was credited to my earnest .In addition,i am a person who has responsibility and conscientious .Generally speaking ,i am a hard working student especially do the thing i am interested in.I will try my best to make it perfect no matter how difficult it is.
可以顺便提供我些.自我介绍比较好的句子.用词的.或可以涉及写的方面.

求高手帮忙看看英文的自我介绍?.请帮忙修改错误地方!面试要用的.所以请保证正确率.看看哪里有语法或用词错误!Good afternoon,my mane is XX.Today I participate this interview .First i want to say thank you for g
Good afternoon.
I am XX.Thank you for giving me the opportunity.It is really a great honor for me to have this opportunity for the interview.
The following is my brief introdution.I am 19 years old and currently study in Shanghai Nanhu Vocational School and will graduate in 2009.
My specialty is air attending service.In the past three years,I worked hard for acquiring some skills and preparing myself for the future career,such as understanding e-tickets,about security check,and other flight-related subjects.
I have very good study records in school and I will continue to prove my capability in learning in the remaining two years.I am also a responsible and conscientious person with a warm heart.As a service-oriented person,I understand well on customers' needs.
Generally speaking,I am a hard working student especially in doing things I am interested in.If I am given the opportunity,I will do my best to complete all assignments no matter how difficult they would be.
Thank you.
记住要好好读顺它.坚持每天读15分钟,把语感练出来.

1.I participate in this interview
2.my speciality(特色)
3.I spent about 3 years learning what I would need in the work in the future
4." In the school my nearly all school record was fine"病句 改为my score on study is good in the school
5.diplomas
差不多吧~~